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Re: Horsin' Around M/F

Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2019 3:55 am
by Rtj65
Stiletto Amore wrote: 5 years ago
Rtj65 wrote: 5 years ago
Stiletto Amore wrote: 5 years ago

Yay! Thank you so much for the feedback. Really nice to hear that you enjoyed the dialogue (especially since so many of my other readers would rather I simply shoved a sock in the protagonists mouth at the first avaliable opportunity ;) )
I mean, there's nothing wrong with doing it that way either ;) but there's something satisfying about letting her run her mouth a bit first and shutting her up later though
Haha! Well I'm relieved to hear that you're not opposed to someone stuffing my mouth with dirty linen on moral grounds ;)
Rather your objection seems to be that I should be seen to work to 'earn' my gag,.. ;)
Of course, it's just much more satisfying that way, don't you think? And besides, those who 'earn' their gags tend to make better noises too... ;)

Re: Horsin' Around M/F

Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2019 4:24 pm
by Stiletto Amore
Of course, it's just much more satisfying that way, don't you think? And besides, those who 'earn' their gags tend to make better noises too... ;)
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Ha! This much is true :)
In reality, I'm so proficient in 'gag-talk' that I'm multi-lingual ;)

Re: Horsin' Around M/F

Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2019 4:53 pm
by Dpsiic
loved the story, including the dialogue. Would love to swap places with the stable boy.

Re: Horsin' Around M/F

Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2019 6:59 pm
by Stiletto Amore
Dpsiic wrote: 5 years ago loved the story, including the dialogue. Would love to swap places with the stable boy.
Really glad you enjoyed the story and the dialogue.

I assume you want to swap places so you could cut me free and we could stop the crooks from sabotaging the race? ;)