Horsin' Around M/F

[Rtj65]

Yay! Thank you so much for the feedback. Really nice to hear that you enjoyed the dialogue (especially since so many of my other readers would rather I simply shoved a sock in the protagonists mouth at the first avaliable opportunity )

I mean, there's nothing wrong with doing it that way either but there's something satisfying about letting her run her mouth a bit first and shutting her up later though

Haha! Well I'm relieved to hear that you're not opposed to someone stuffing my mouth with dirty linen on moral grounds
Rather your objection seems to be that I should be seen to work to 'earn' my gag,..

Of course, it's just much more satisfying that way, don't you think? And besides, those who 'earn' their gags tend to make better noises too...

[Stiletto Amore]

Of course, it's just much more satisfying that way, don't you think? And besides, those who 'earn' their gags tend to make better noises too...
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Ha! This much is true
In reality, I'm so proficient in 'gag-talk' that I'm multi-lingual

[Dpsiic]

loved the story, including the dialogue. Would love to swap places with the stable boy.

[Stiletto Amore]

loved the story, including the dialogue. Would love to swap places with the stable boy.

Really glad you enjoyed the story and the dialogue.

I assume you want to swap places so you could cut me free and we could stop the crooks from sabotaging the race?