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glad you like the story Tazz thank you for feedback most appreciated Tazz
As much as I love the story mega does make me think how much better blue bloods would of been with more bondage scenes for the awesome ladies in the series
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I think so to mate would of loved to see Arrogant and Condescending Erin in particular or maybe midgit Edit with her Scrappy doo persona overpowered, bound and gagged by a lesbian ex convict! Especially stripped down to their underwear! Due to this I have wrote several stories including the charactersVal1960 wrote: 1 month ago As much as I love the story mega does make me think how much better blue bloods would of been with more bondage scenes for the awesome ladies in the series
That would of been the best tv scene ever shown megamega23101982 wrote: 1 month agoI think so to mate would of loved to see Arrogant and Condescending Erin in particular or maybe midgit Edit with her Scrappy doo persona overpowered, bound and gagged by a lesbian ex convict! Especially stripped down to their underwear! Due to this I have wrote several stories including the charactersVal1960 wrote: 1 month ago As much as I love the story mega does make me think how much better blue bloods would of been with more bondage scenes for the awesome ladies in the series
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Do agree about the characters in bluebloods! Although Danny's ultra cute nurse wife got a scene could of been much better, same with Erins daughter who is definitely as cute as she is the most annoyingly gulible
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Definitely both their scenes could of been better always wanted baez and Danny's original partner to get a scene as well. New story coming on later mateRingo16885 wrote: 1 month ago Do agree about the characters in bluebloods! Although Danny's ultra cute nurse wife got a scene could of been much better, same with Erins daughter who is definitely as cute as she is the most annoyingly gulible
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Brilliant mega looking forward to your next release this one was brilliantmega23101982 wrote: 1 month agoDefinitely both their scenes could of been better always wanted baez and Danny's original partner to get a scene as well. New story coming on later mateRingo16885 wrote: 1 month ago Do agree about the characters in bluebloods! Although Danny's ultra cute nurse wife got a scene could of been much better, same with Erins daughter who is definitely as cute as she is the most annoyingly gulible
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Posting now guys, new story created using a jungle warrior princess type character called Shugla, created by DA artist AIBinder with his permission thanks
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Shugla the Untamed or is she? (F/F Scenes)!!
Veronica Shugla from the age of nine grew up in a unique raised plateau in the Amazon Rain Forest, a 'Lost World'! There is Where many amazing long thought extinct and yet to be discovered plants, animals and life forms exist! Her parents and herself were part of an expedition that got trapped on the plateau and the world thought none of them survived as they never returned and couldn't be traced? Shugla quickly learned to adapt, along with her parents, and her survival skills are what initially kept the newly arrived explorer's alive!
While the rest of her parents expedition died, her mother and father adapted to life on the plateau and built a large treehouse in the middle of the forest. When another expedition too discover the lost world turned up and also got stranded, Veronica had been living alone for eleven years as her parents had disappeared one day whilst out collecting specimens. Convinced they are still alive, she refuses to leave the plateau until she finds them again. That however would of been a challenge as it is believed that no one returned alive from the plateau either!
Her survival skills are amazing and she's more than capable of looking after herself in a fight. She is friends with the local tribes of the plateau and is always there to help her good friend, Sil. Sil is a similar aged girl from the Wudkan tribe and her feeling for her as she gets older are something more than a friend would feel?
She has become firm friends with Lord John Royton, appreciating his hunting skills and admires, Challenger's genius. Since arriving on the Plateau, Challenger has gradually become the father figure to her and he's very protective of her, which she values and appreciates.
She doesn't get on very well with, Marguerite , especially since they got off on the wrong foot when the other woman offered her as a bride to the Zanga chieftain in exchange for a way off of the plateau and some gems! Over the years together on the plateau constant arguing has developed into a grudging respect and an uneasy friendship, although she did still think that one day, Marguerite will just abandon them. Shugla in later years began to realise she did find the older and more experienced woman attractive, and was learning about her emotions when discovering you don't have to like someone to find them sexually appealing!
She considered the group as her family and was sad to see them go when they eventually find a way off the plateau. Especially, Ned Malone, who she also has feelings for, but had begun to doubt the depth of them as they are similar too the feelings she had for her lady friends but easier to understand as seen as a more conventional emotion in the old world!
When he assumed that she would leave with them if they found a way back to London, she was adamant about staying to find her parents. She concluded from this that she wasn't actually in love with him as she'd thought. With this in mind, she told him that his friendship was more important to her as romance doesn't last. Now he's gone, she doesn't seem to be so sure of her convictions, but again has lots of struggles understanding her modern world emotions in this unique but ancient world!
Before Malone left, he found part of a journal that was written by her parents and gave it to her. From this latest piece of information, she decided to leave the treehouse herself and go looking for them using the book as a guide. When she returned, she'd brought with her a pendant that had been given to her by the elder of a tribe she'd visited that belonged to her mother!
Convinced that the pendant would lead to her parents, she is drawn to a monolith and places the pendant on it. She then 'sees' what happened to her parents and is brought peace. Unfortunately, her father is dead but her mother resides in a place called, Babylonia and will find her when the time is right. Veronica also learned that she is, or will be, a guardian of the plateau just like her mother - her destiny awaits her when the time is right! With this in mind, Shugla remained on the plateau with no new visitors from the outside world, until now!
It had been nearly one hundred years since the last expedition left the Plateau, only for two more amazing things to happen that made Shugla wonder if anyone would ever return and if they didn't how long would she exist there? The strange atmospheric pressure when there effected the minds of the expedition so much they had absolutely no memory of how they got the amazing artifacts they brought back too the world and were unable to EVER return!
What else happens, whether it was the food, climate, air, you name it once you reach adulthood from the outside world in the Plateau you age so slowly that nearly one hundred years since they left Shugla as only aged at most a month! Sadly this didn't work like this for members of the tribe and her lover and then wife Sila had passed away. However after a long time of grieving Shugla was able to move on with a new surprising special friend?
One of the tribes people had been involved with a man off the expedition and without telling him she fell pregnant let him return too his family in the outside world. The woman died shortly after giving birth and naming the girl Annie, after a lady called Annie Wheeler, (Zendaya Coleman), the man said she looked like from outside world. Annie grew too look like her mother but with the outside world people's gift for aging slowly in adulthood. Annie and Shugla eventually grew close and live together in the tree house as lovers till now?
'Thought you associated with criminals Nicole Wallace, (Olivia D'Arbo)?' Young tomb raider Lara Croft, (Alicia Vikander) stated rudely and honestly as she sat in the crime Queen Pin's Office wondering what she was doing here with other experts in similar fields? 'Yeah you discovered about an ancient Relic that enables the ultimate crimes to do?' Relic Hunter Sydney Fox, (Tia Carrere) said which made Lara and her personal assistant Claudia, (Lindy Booth) laugh before making too leave before Nicole stopped them with a relic she showed them!
'That's a feather from a prehistoric bird and a tooth of a Dinosaur that is only recently removed!' Got your attention who? The criminal also has a map too where the objects are!' You can have it and all I want is you to credit my help with any amazing discoveries you find?' The explorers were amazed with what Nicole wanted in return, but settled and left when Nicole explained what she was getting out of this! 'I am not one for exploring possible fatal lost causes, but it could lead to me getting a few positive public relations! As the three of you will know I am very much in need of a few good words in the news! Don't you think'?
Zora Bennett, (Scarlett Johansson), sat down for a meeting about too turn down the exploration with the famous three hunters/raiders but as she was about too say so the feather and tooth were placed in front of the famous and renowned hunter and also professor of palaeontology! 'Wow, say no more I am in! I am SO IN'!
'Quiet Claudia, Just Look!' Zora stated as she forcefully pulled Claudia behind some vegetation. Claudia was going too shout at Zora in frustration, she had originally worked on Sydney's reception at the University. However, since her husband Nigel's injury that forced him to step back from relic hunting she has worked hard too fill his shoes and as more than done this, Sydney seeing a lot of herself in Claudia!
Claudia however did look, and she could not believe her eyes! 'That's a Triceratops! Zora it's a Triceratops a real one not the one of those Jurassic Park manufactured ones Zora!' Zora covered the mouth of the amazed lady too point out that a giant carnivore the Allosaurus was hunting the herbivore! 'What you doing Zora? Killing one too save the other is just as bad, stop!' Claudia struck Zora bruising her cheek without realising the shot simply knocked out the Allosaurus allowing the Triceratops too escape!
'You hit harder than you look Claudia! Do you work out?' Zora passed out not realising a dart had hit her neck and knocked her out. 'Zora you ok, sorry I didn't know, I am sorry Zora!' Claudia was startled as suddenly she was a dart in the neck by Annie who jumped down in front of her before she passed out like her friend, 'I am a good shot like your friend with that Allosaurus, no? Well I also only kill if needed, especially when fun is to be had'!
'No pick up from Claudia, Sydney!' Lara stated as she caught a poisonous ancient snake in her hand and saved her friend, 'Careful Sydney, I can't keep saving you!' Lara said mockingly as Sydney pulled out a knife and startled her, especially as it flew towards her and thankfully into her shoulder. 'Guess they did exist Lara the mythical giant meat eating rope plants? Guess I just saved you?' Sydney stated as she pulled her knife out of the plant she stopped, however she was knocked out cold by an Amazonian Lady swinging in on a vine! Lara was overpowered despite her combat skills and knocked out by a sleeper hold! 'My name is Shugla, Plateau Protector, welcome intruder and sadly I can't let you leave, EVER'!
'Annie, they look exhausted!' Shugla stated as she walked into the treehouse her bound, gagged, ear blocked and blindfolded captives. There ripped clothes acted as stuffed cleave gags and blindfolds on Lara and Sydney who were stripped to black knickers and bra and white bra and red panties respectively! (Shugla thought the underwear was cute and fancied wearing it herself for Annie!) They had there wrists bound in a crucifix style device round her neck common in Amazonian Tripes and leashed and dragged by Shugla!
'Your the only girl I have been with, Shugla thought the additional experience would help me please you better?' Annie asked as she inspected Claudia's thong animal print underwear and Zora's army print set? (She to wanted to save the underwear to impress her lover Shugla later!) 'They get too wet too soon!' Annie said as she ruffled the hair of her naked bound stood spread and also stuffed cleave gagged and blindfolded and ear plugged with their own ripped clothes! Annie had fingered, caressed and licked her captives to multiple forced orgasms! Shugla put her hands inside Lara and Sydney's panties to masturbate them as she kissed Annie passionately! 'Okay Annie, your not the only to want to enjoy our new friends'!
The sexual ecstasy meant Shugla and Annie lowered there guards and didn't realise a gas cannister was thrown in and knocked them out. Several male and Female poachers entered the room full of unconscious heroines led by internationally despised poacher Truly, )Roberta Angelica), 'Well thank you explorers, relic hunters, tomb raiders and Amazonians! But me and my friends will take it from here'!
Lara and Zora woke up at the same time in their mobile cage as did Sydney and Claudia in one opposite at nearly the same time. They were all zip tied and black ball gagged in nothing but black panties, (They were only given these to hold the dildo in their vagina's and butt plugs in their anuses 'snug')! Shugla and Annie were also Semi naked and bound and humiliated but seeming more frustrated as they watched tribes been killed, tortured and their villages burned while the ancient animals were loaded in cages!
The four heroines felt hopeless guilt at what they had done but it was actually Claudia who realised what to do and use her woman charms? Playing defenceless and sexually keen she lured in two male guards who fancied some easy bondage sex! However she out smarted them and her and the other five freed prisoners turned the tide and captured the poachers, as well as releasing and saving the animals and tribal people!
Shugla agreed in respect to free Zora, Claudia, Lara and Sydney into the real world on the promise they block access back into the plateau and punish Truly and her team? They turned over Truly and her poacher friends too Nicole Wallace, who specialises in controlling, breaking and sexually violating her enemies, as they were going too discover soon!
Veronica Shugla from the age of nine grew up in a unique raised plateau in the Amazon Rain Forest, a 'Lost World'! There is Where many amazing long thought extinct and yet to be discovered plants, animals and life forms exist! Her parents and herself were part of an expedition that got trapped on the plateau and the world thought none of them survived as they never returned and couldn't be traced? Shugla quickly learned to adapt, along with her parents, and her survival skills are what initially kept the newly arrived explorer's alive!
While the rest of her parents expedition died, her mother and father adapted to life on the plateau and built a large treehouse in the middle of the forest. When another expedition too discover the lost world turned up and also got stranded, Veronica had been living alone for eleven years as her parents had disappeared one day whilst out collecting specimens. Convinced they are still alive, she refuses to leave the plateau until she finds them again. That however would of been a challenge as it is believed that no one returned alive from the plateau either!
Her survival skills are amazing and she's more than capable of looking after herself in a fight. She is friends with the local tribes of the plateau and is always there to help her good friend, Sil. Sil is a similar aged girl from the Wudkan tribe and her feeling for her as she gets older are something more than a friend would feel?
She has become firm friends with Lord John Royton, appreciating his hunting skills and admires, Challenger's genius. Since arriving on the Plateau, Challenger has gradually become the father figure to her and he's very protective of her, which she values and appreciates.
She doesn't get on very well with, Marguerite , especially since they got off on the wrong foot when the other woman offered her as a bride to the Zanga chieftain in exchange for a way off of the plateau and some gems! Over the years together on the plateau constant arguing has developed into a grudging respect and an uneasy friendship, although she did still think that one day, Marguerite will just abandon them. Shugla in later years began to realise she did find the older and more experienced woman attractive, and was learning about her emotions when discovering you don't have to like someone to find them sexually appealing!
She considered the group as her family and was sad to see them go when they eventually find a way off the plateau. Especially, Ned Malone, who she also has feelings for, but had begun to doubt the depth of them as they are similar too the feelings she had for her lady friends but easier to understand as seen as a more conventional emotion in the old world!
When he assumed that she would leave with them if they found a way back to London, she was adamant about staying to find her parents. She concluded from this that she wasn't actually in love with him as she'd thought. With this in mind, she told him that his friendship was more important to her as romance doesn't last. Now he's gone, she doesn't seem to be so sure of her convictions, but again has lots of struggles understanding her modern world emotions in this unique but ancient world!
Before Malone left, he found part of a journal that was written by her parents and gave it to her. From this latest piece of information, she decided to leave the treehouse herself and go looking for them using the book as a guide. When she returned, she'd brought with her a pendant that had been given to her by the elder of a tribe she'd visited that belonged to her mother!
Convinced that the pendant would lead to her parents, she is drawn to a monolith and places the pendant on it. She then 'sees' what happened to her parents and is brought peace. Unfortunately, her father is dead but her mother resides in a place called, Babylonia and will find her when the time is right. Veronica also learned that she is, or will be, a guardian of the plateau just like her mother - her destiny awaits her when the time is right! With this in mind, Shugla remained on the plateau with no new visitors from the outside world, until now!
It had been nearly one hundred years since the last expedition left the Plateau, only for two more amazing things to happen that made Shugla wonder if anyone would ever return and if they didn't how long would she exist there? The strange atmospheric pressure when there effected the minds of the expedition so much they had absolutely no memory of how they got the amazing artifacts they brought back too the world and were unable to EVER return!
What else happens, whether it was the food, climate, air, you name it once you reach adulthood from the outside world in the Plateau you age so slowly that nearly one hundred years since they left Shugla as only aged at most a month! Sadly this didn't work like this for members of the tribe and her lover and then wife Sila had passed away. However after a long time of grieving Shugla was able to move on with a new surprising special friend?
One of the tribes people had been involved with a man off the expedition and without telling him she fell pregnant let him return too his family in the outside world. The woman died shortly after giving birth and naming the girl Annie, after a lady called Annie Wheeler, (Zendaya Coleman), the man said she looked like from outside world. Annie grew too look like her mother but with the outside world people's gift for aging slowly in adulthood. Annie and Shugla eventually grew close and live together in the tree house as lovers till now?
'Thought you associated with criminals Nicole Wallace, (Olivia D'Arbo)?' Young tomb raider Lara Croft, (Alicia Vikander) stated rudely and honestly as she sat in the crime Queen Pin's Office wondering what she was doing here with other experts in similar fields? 'Yeah you discovered about an ancient Relic that enables the ultimate crimes to do?' Relic Hunter Sydney Fox, (Tia Carrere) said which made Lara and her personal assistant Claudia, (Lindy Booth) laugh before making too leave before Nicole stopped them with a relic she showed them!
'That's a feather from a prehistoric bird and a tooth of a Dinosaur that is only recently removed!' Got your attention who? The criminal also has a map too where the objects are!' You can have it and all I want is you to credit my help with any amazing discoveries you find?' The explorers were amazed with what Nicole wanted in return, but settled and left when Nicole explained what she was getting out of this! 'I am not one for exploring possible fatal lost causes, but it could lead to me getting a few positive public relations! As the three of you will know I am very much in need of a few good words in the news! Don't you think'?
Zora Bennett, (Scarlett Johansson), sat down for a meeting about too turn down the exploration with the famous three hunters/raiders but as she was about too say so the feather and tooth were placed in front of the famous and renowned hunter and also professor of palaeontology! 'Wow, say no more I am in! I am SO IN'!
'Quiet Claudia, Just Look!' Zora stated as she forcefully pulled Claudia behind some vegetation. Claudia was going too shout at Zora in frustration, she had originally worked on Sydney's reception at the University. However, since her husband Nigel's injury that forced him to step back from relic hunting she has worked hard too fill his shoes and as more than done this, Sydney seeing a lot of herself in Claudia!
Claudia however did look, and she could not believe her eyes! 'That's a Triceratops! Zora it's a Triceratops a real one not the one of those Jurassic Park manufactured ones Zora!' Zora covered the mouth of the amazed lady too point out that a giant carnivore the Allosaurus was hunting the herbivore! 'What you doing Zora? Killing one too save the other is just as bad, stop!' Claudia struck Zora bruising her cheek without realising the shot simply knocked out the Allosaurus allowing the Triceratops too escape!
'You hit harder than you look Claudia! Do you work out?' Zora passed out not realising a dart had hit her neck and knocked her out. 'Zora you ok, sorry I didn't know, I am sorry Zora!' Claudia was startled as suddenly she was a dart in the neck by Annie who jumped down in front of her before she passed out like her friend, 'I am a good shot like your friend with that Allosaurus, no? Well I also only kill if needed, especially when fun is to be had'!
'No pick up from Claudia, Sydney!' Lara stated as she caught a poisonous ancient snake in her hand and saved her friend, 'Careful Sydney, I can't keep saving you!' Lara said mockingly as Sydney pulled out a knife and startled her, especially as it flew towards her and thankfully into her shoulder. 'Guess they did exist Lara the mythical giant meat eating rope plants? Guess I just saved you?' Sydney stated as she pulled her knife out of the plant she stopped, however she was knocked out cold by an Amazonian Lady swinging in on a vine! Lara was overpowered despite her combat skills and knocked out by a sleeper hold! 'My name is Shugla, Plateau Protector, welcome intruder and sadly I can't let you leave, EVER'!
'Annie, they look exhausted!' Shugla stated as she walked into the treehouse her bound, gagged, ear blocked and blindfolded captives. There ripped clothes acted as stuffed cleave gags and blindfolds on Lara and Sydney who were stripped to black knickers and bra and white bra and red panties respectively! (Shugla thought the underwear was cute and fancied wearing it herself for Annie!) They had there wrists bound in a crucifix style device round her neck common in Amazonian Tripes and leashed and dragged by Shugla!
'Your the only girl I have been with, Shugla thought the additional experience would help me please you better?' Annie asked as she inspected Claudia's thong animal print underwear and Zora's army print set? (She to wanted to save the underwear to impress her lover Shugla later!) 'They get too wet too soon!' Annie said as she ruffled the hair of her naked bound stood spread and also stuffed cleave gagged and blindfolded and ear plugged with their own ripped clothes! Annie had fingered, caressed and licked her captives to multiple forced orgasms! Shugla put her hands inside Lara and Sydney's panties to masturbate them as she kissed Annie passionately! 'Okay Annie, your not the only to want to enjoy our new friends'!
The sexual ecstasy meant Shugla and Annie lowered there guards and didn't realise a gas cannister was thrown in and knocked them out. Several male and Female poachers entered the room full of unconscious heroines led by internationally despised poacher Truly, )Roberta Angelica), 'Well thank you explorers, relic hunters, tomb raiders and Amazonians! But me and my friends will take it from here'!
Lara and Zora woke up at the same time in their mobile cage as did Sydney and Claudia in one opposite at nearly the same time. They were all zip tied and black ball gagged in nothing but black panties, (They were only given these to hold the dildo in their vagina's and butt plugs in their anuses 'snug')! Shugla and Annie were also Semi naked and bound and humiliated but seeming more frustrated as they watched tribes been killed, tortured and their villages burned while the ancient animals were loaded in cages!
The four heroines felt hopeless guilt at what they had done but it was actually Claudia who realised what to do and use her woman charms? Playing defenceless and sexually keen she lured in two male guards who fancied some easy bondage sex! However she out smarted them and her and the other five freed prisoners turned the tide and captured the poachers, as well as releasing and saving the animals and tribal people!
Shugla agreed in respect to free Zora, Claudia, Lara and Sydney into the real world on the promise they block access back into the plateau and punish Truly and her team? They turned over Truly and her poacher friends too Nicole Wallace, who specialises in controlling, breaking and sexually violating her enemies, as they were going too discover soon!
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Not just a great story you 'tied' in nicely with with Veronica in the lost world, but just visited the artist who created Shugla on DA, awesome share and find as well mega, thanks again

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Thanks Ringo glad you enjoyed visiting the DA artists page mate as wellRingo16885 wrote: 1 month ago Not just a great story you 'tied' in nicely with with Veronica in the lost world, but just visited the artist who created Shugla on DA, awesome share and find as well mega, thanks again![]()
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Such a good story mega love the links back to the tv series lost world with Veronica. Was reading about the series and its a shame they never finished it as the plans to wrap it up were really good in my opinion. Think its cool that your using DA OC characters to and hope you can do this again in the future? Thanks mega

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Thank you mate I am planning to use more DA OC in my stories mate so glad you like them
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Second what has been said above mega, love how you incorperated the Veronica Shugla character into your story! Maybe you could do the same with Gun-Girl-Zoe, Cassandra Clack or Laura Mischief OC'S from DA next mate? Brilliant story mega great read.
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Thank you nadal and yes more are coming using OC's wrote by bdsm deviants on DA. The ones you wrote above in your list i definitely will look into using in future nadalMrnadal1234555 wrote: 1 month ago Second what has been said above mega, love how you incorperated the Veronica Shugla character into your story! Maybe you could do the same with Gun-Girl-Zoe, Cassandra Clack or Laura Mischief OC'S from DA next mate? Brilliant story mega great read.
The way you concentrate on tying up all loose ends in a story mega to make the story, however far fetched,make sense and line up. Great story mega
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Thank you mate for noticing this, i get frustrated with loose ends and try not to leave them because of this mate thanksMrBigMac1 wrote: 1 month ago The way you concentrate on tying up all loose ends in a story mega to make the story, however far fetched,make sense and line up. Great story mega
Really great story and I second that you are really focused on making sure every things fits together in your stories, I read you mentioned you have autism earlier, by friend is similar everything has to link up and fit together for him. Looking forward to your weekend post as always 

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Thank you Tazz and yeah i have ASD and this is why i need everything to piece together as if not a get very frustrated thanksTazz1984 wrote: 1 month ago Really great story and I second that you are really focused on making sure every things fits together in your stories, I read you mentioned you have autism earlier, by friend is similar everything has to link up and fit together for him. Looking forward to your weekend post as always![]()
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Really exciting story mega love the use of Shugla Character from DA and the way you tied her story into Veronica from the lost world. Looking forward to your weekend story but been honest be difficult to top that one pal.
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Thank you Ronnie i will try my bestRonnie1967 wrote: 1 month ago Really exciting story mega love the use of Shugla Character from DA and the way you tied her story into Veronica from the lost world. Looking forward to your weekend story but been honest be difficult to top that one pal.
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Revenge on the Authorities! (F/F Scenes)!! Complete!
Officer Jayne Smith, 27 had just finished her shift at midnight doing some overtime to cover her friend Rose who was feeling a lot of Sickness with her first pregnancy. Jayne was using the strategy of been super helpful too mask that she is actually super envious as well! She had found out that the chief inspector she was having an affair with was playing her along, after she had let him talk her into having the abortion she didn't want herself to go through!
As she wearily entered she was startled by a noise upstairs. 'What's that she thought I should go check, probably just my cat she thought.' She wondered cautiously upstairs looking around, nothing seemed out of place in the two bedroom house she had been left by her grand parents in their will for her. She then went into her two bedroom in her terraced house and saw an athletic woman, in black standing around five foot 6 inches tall ,rummaging through her drawers having just found her jewellery box!
Jayne was shocked and feeling some what embarrassed by the current events taking place! She is a police officer and responsible for catching criminals breaking into other people's homes and properties? Not having them break into hers! The other other officers already wind her up and call her officer 'Barbie' or 'Boobs' due too her blonde hair, blue eyes, slim build and ample chest! They would never let her live this down if she couldn't deal with this herself!
'What you doing in my house! Stop before I use my, err!' before she could finish the also athletic built criminal charged at Jayne pushing her into the wall and making her drop the weapon she was going to use in the warning she never got to finish. Jayne went to throw a punch but the villain skilfully caught her arm bent up her back and threw Jayne to the other side of her king size bed, Showing the villains greater combat skills!
'Hello miss cop nice to meet you,' smirked the thief as Jayne pulled herself up. 'Because I respect lady cops trying to make it in a male dominate role I will make you a deal?' The thief offered and Jane rejected the false respect as she saw it, 'No deals b@tch your under arrest!' said Jayne. The plucky defiance made The thief laugh loudly with a sinister cackle!
'My dear I don't want to humiliate you I have already helped myself to your secret stash, thanks.' 'Cuff yourself to bed and a leave you in piece. or else you will really regret it!' Jayne again launched at the thief with her fist who with little effort blocked and punched the police officer in her stomach. Jayne was determined and went to kick the thief with her martial arts training but the thief slipped under her, taking her legs away and with this also putting her lights out! The thief looked down and smiled at the fallen police officer, 'You were warned Officer 'Blondie'? Well my dear a promise is a promise let the fun begin'!
Jayne walk around 10 minutes later to the thief's voice. 'better put my get away kit on, thanks again.' She was stood at the end of the bed her toned body in a black bra and thong set. 'Shame police wages can't buy better underwear?' The thief scoffed at Jayne cuffed spread eagle to the bed as Jayne noticed she was in her white cotton bra and pink panties with white trim! The uncomfortable feeling in her anus she would later confirm was a large black butt plug she had been broken in with, after least been given lube I suppose!
'MMMPPPHH,' Jayne said looking at bedside mirror noticing she was cleave gagged with what seemed some of her black panties and some white ones used for stuffing. 'I couldn't decide whether to shove your black or white pants down your throat, so a tossed a coin and white won!' the thief laughed. 'MMMPPPHH!' Jayne replied angrily. The thief finished dressing in her outfit quickly and leaned over Jayne, touching her face. 'Time for the or else!' Jayne murmured begging haven't I suffered enough she thought?
The thief lent over and kissed her cheek fitting a sleeper blindfold to her eyes. Jayne then felt the front of her pants lifted and a cold narrow object slid down... 'Oh no!' she thought as the thief turned the dildo on once inside her, buzzing away on a low teasing but not fulfilling setting! 'That should keep you amused, bye sweetie!' Like that she was gone and the thief thankfully for Police Officer Jayne Smith forever, she hoped?
Jayne broke wrist cuffs around 50 minutes later and freed herself. She found the thief took six hundred dollars she had stashed and cried angrily at the humiliation she felt from what had just happened during such a difficult time in her life! Jayne went to work the next day in another uniform and was to bothered by the details to report the incident with the thief and felt that even if the thief took six MILLION dollars from her the humiliation and embarrassment wasn't worth her reporting the crime!
'Please Gloria, I no what happened to me was terrible, but you shouldn't of done what you did!' Luis Montero told his daughter Gloria, who had a brilliant lawyer who was able too use the poor police officers support too get her out of prison much sooner than she probably deserved. She used criminal vigilante justice to avenge her dad, when he never wanted her to do so. Also, when she claimed she earned six hundred dollars in cash from her delivery job, he felt it sounded suspicious but he couldn't prove anything against is daughter, come carer, plus there was no criminal evidence or police reports on his daughter coming out? Her parole officer she was sleeping with, funny enough said she was a model parolee!
Gloria Christina Montero, (Jessica Camacho), was a spree killer who committed a string of sniper shootings targeting people who wronged her father. Gloria was the sole child of Louis Montero, a detective with the Narcotics Division of the NYPD. Luis lost his job after taking a bullet meant for his partner Odafin 'Fin' Tutuola during an undercover operation to oust a drug lord named Benito Escobar. Since then, he struggled to pay for treatments for his wife Rita, who was suffering from breast cancer. During this time, Gloria was serving in the U.S. Army as a trained marksman. When she asked for a personal leave to help deal with her family's situation, the Army instead gave her a general discharge due to her mental incapability to serve!
Around the same time, Luis took work as a security guard to help pay for Rita's cancer treatments, but his former lieutenant Toni Howard found out and reported him to the department, who then cancelled his disability pay. Because of this, the family was unable to pay for Rita's treatments, and she eventually died. Furthermore, the financial strain caused the Monteros to lose their house as well. A month later, Gloria went into the police academy, hoping to follow in her father's footsteps. However, she continued having emotional trouble handling her father's decline and her mother's death, and she was expelled after failing a psychological exam. Afterwards, Gloria decided to seek revenge against the people responsible for her father's current living condition and her mother's death, targeting their next of kin!
Using a scoped .45-caliber Les Baer Prowler pistol stolen by Luis during another undercover operation, she first shot Detective Amanda Rollins, (Kelli Giddish), Fin's current partner with the SVU, from approximately a hundred yards away. Rollins was shot through the shoulder, but survived. Gloria then fatally shot Mark Howard, the son of her father's former lieutenant Toni Howard, who was responsible for cancelling Luis's disability pay. Next, she killed Escobar's girlfriend Ana Tejada while she was out with her son. After Luis turned himself in and claimed responsibility for the shootings to protect her, Gloria fled with a stash of guns and killed a traffic agent who ticketed her father's vehicle. Stealing a delivery van, Gloria went to an abandoned hospital in Queens, where her mother died. There, she killed a security guard and left behind a videotaped manifesto for the police to view.
Fleeing in another car, Gloria travelled to her former home, and took the family living inside hostage after waiting for the father to leave, and demanded to see Fin. When he came in and took off his bulletproof vest, she yelled at him for not staying in touch with her family and for not knowing what they were going through. Despite Fin's attempts at apologizing and admitting his guilt in not being shot instead of Luis, Gloria tries to shoot the hostages. Before she could pull the trigger, Fin tackles her and wrestles the gun out of her hand. She is then arrested and taken outside by Fin, where she is greeted by Luis. Gloria tries speaking to him, only to break down in tears before being taken into a police car while Luis watches!
The was a hot shot lawyer who took this case pro bono due too the publicity it gave him and his firm and also after his son's accidental shooting, a admitted hatred for police officers! The situation got so tense that the District Attorney offered and they accepted guilty due too mental defect and after six years in a mental criminal facility she was proven safe too enter society and paroled! While inside she was targeted by mental nurse Jeanette Owens, (Diana Scarwid) who has a daughter Ann Owens, (Alexandria Lydon) who is also a mother and a police officer! Been a mental health nurse she was able to hide the psychological damage when she and her then pregnant with her grandson daughter, were bound and gagged prisoners of escaped convicts for days in her own home!
(See Prison Break season two Episode Buried too see this awesome scene I used in my story!)
Jeanette often had Gloria put in isolation and tried her best too ruin her parole. When she was paroled however she decided that she wanted too teach Jeanette a lesson she would NEVER FORGET! Ann in what felt like a case of twisted de ja vue came home from work to find her mum tapped too a chair legs and wrists spread in her birthday suit! Jeanette tried to warn her daughter best she could trashing and grunting into her panties stuffed in her mouth and held in place with black tape wrapped around her head! 'Sweet Dreams Ann, we will have such fun when she wakes up hey mum?' Gloria laughed after knocking out Jeanette's daughter from behind!
'Well that was fun!' Gloria said after restraining Ann like her mother and making each watch the other made to orgasm after been given oral by their captor. 'I recorded it too! I also found the reports your naughty cop daughter hid that prove you should maybe be better as a patient not a nurse Jeanette?' Gloria then before leaving a knife in Ann's hands to cut her and her mum free before she left! 'I will call this and the three hundred dollars cash I have taken from this house quits! If you come after me the videos will come out and your repercussions will be your problem, not mine! Good bye ladies forever'!
'You see they never came forward! None of you pigs do!' Gloria said to Officer Carolina who she had bound, gagged and sexually humiliated the police officer who couldn't reply with the gag in her mouth! 'I not only know you coppers don't want the humiliation to come out but people who cross my employers, like you did with Ms Nicole Wallace, (Olivia D'Arbo) no it's best too keep quiet! The police so hurt me and my family! Pay back, aint it a B@TCH'!
Officer Jayne Smith, 27 had just finished her shift at midnight doing some overtime to cover her friend Rose who was feeling a lot of Sickness with her first pregnancy. Jayne was using the strategy of been super helpful too mask that she is actually super envious as well! She had found out that the chief inspector she was having an affair with was playing her along, after she had let him talk her into having the abortion she didn't want herself to go through!
As she wearily entered she was startled by a noise upstairs. 'What's that she thought I should go check, probably just my cat she thought.' She wondered cautiously upstairs looking around, nothing seemed out of place in the two bedroom house she had been left by her grand parents in their will for her. She then went into her two bedroom in her terraced house and saw an athletic woman, in black standing around five foot 6 inches tall ,rummaging through her drawers having just found her jewellery box!
Jayne was shocked and feeling some what embarrassed by the current events taking place! She is a police officer and responsible for catching criminals breaking into other people's homes and properties? Not having them break into hers! The other other officers already wind her up and call her officer 'Barbie' or 'Boobs' due too her blonde hair, blue eyes, slim build and ample chest! They would never let her live this down if she couldn't deal with this herself!
'What you doing in my house! Stop before I use my, err!' before she could finish the also athletic built criminal charged at Jayne pushing her into the wall and making her drop the weapon she was going to use in the warning she never got to finish. Jayne went to throw a punch but the villain skilfully caught her arm bent up her back and threw Jayne to the other side of her king size bed, Showing the villains greater combat skills!
'Hello miss cop nice to meet you,' smirked the thief as Jayne pulled herself up. 'Because I respect lady cops trying to make it in a male dominate role I will make you a deal?' The thief offered and Jane rejected the false respect as she saw it, 'No deals b@tch your under arrest!' said Jayne. The plucky defiance made The thief laugh loudly with a sinister cackle!
'My dear I don't want to humiliate you I have already helped myself to your secret stash, thanks.' 'Cuff yourself to bed and a leave you in piece. or else you will really regret it!' Jayne again launched at the thief with her fist who with little effort blocked and punched the police officer in her stomach. Jayne was determined and went to kick the thief with her martial arts training but the thief slipped under her, taking her legs away and with this also putting her lights out! The thief looked down and smiled at the fallen police officer, 'You were warned Officer 'Blondie'? Well my dear a promise is a promise let the fun begin'!
Jayne walk around 10 minutes later to the thief's voice. 'better put my get away kit on, thanks again.' She was stood at the end of the bed her toned body in a black bra and thong set. 'Shame police wages can't buy better underwear?' The thief scoffed at Jayne cuffed spread eagle to the bed as Jayne noticed she was in her white cotton bra and pink panties with white trim! The uncomfortable feeling in her anus she would later confirm was a large black butt plug she had been broken in with, after least been given lube I suppose!
'MMMPPPHH,' Jayne said looking at bedside mirror noticing she was cleave gagged with what seemed some of her black panties and some white ones used for stuffing. 'I couldn't decide whether to shove your black or white pants down your throat, so a tossed a coin and white won!' the thief laughed. 'MMMPPPHH!' Jayne replied angrily. The thief finished dressing in her outfit quickly and leaned over Jayne, touching her face. 'Time for the or else!' Jayne murmured begging haven't I suffered enough she thought?
The thief lent over and kissed her cheek fitting a sleeper blindfold to her eyes. Jayne then felt the front of her pants lifted and a cold narrow object slid down... 'Oh no!' she thought as the thief turned the dildo on once inside her, buzzing away on a low teasing but not fulfilling setting! 'That should keep you amused, bye sweetie!' Like that she was gone and the thief thankfully for Police Officer Jayne Smith forever, she hoped?
Jayne broke wrist cuffs around 50 minutes later and freed herself. She found the thief took six hundred dollars she had stashed and cried angrily at the humiliation she felt from what had just happened during such a difficult time in her life! Jayne went to work the next day in another uniform and was to bothered by the details to report the incident with the thief and felt that even if the thief took six MILLION dollars from her the humiliation and embarrassment wasn't worth her reporting the crime!
'Please Gloria, I no what happened to me was terrible, but you shouldn't of done what you did!' Luis Montero told his daughter Gloria, who had a brilliant lawyer who was able too use the poor police officers support too get her out of prison much sooner than she probably deserved. She used criminal vigilante justice to avenge her dad, when he never wanted her to do so. Also, when she claimed she earned six hundred dollars in cash from her delivery job, he felt it sounded suspicious but he couldn't prove anything against is daughter, come carer, plus there was no criminal evidence or police reports on his daughter coming out? Her parole officer she was sleeping with, funny enough said she was a model parolee!
Gloria Christina Montero, (Jessica Camacho), was a spree killer who committed a string of sniper shootings targeting people who wronged her father. Gloria was the sole child of Louis Montero, a detective with the Narcotics Division of the NYPD. Luis lost his job after taking a bullet meant for his partner Odafin 'Fin' Tutuola during an undercover operation to oust a drug lord named Benito Escobar. Since then, he struggled to pay for treatments for his wife Rita, who was suffering from breast cancer. During this time, Gloria was serving in the U.S. Army as a trained marksman. When she asked for a personal leave to help deal with her family's situation, the Army instead gave her a general discharge due to her mental incapability to serve!
Around the same time, Luis took work as a security guard to help pay for Rita's cancer treatments, but his former lieutenant Toni Howard found out and reported him to the department, who then cancelled his disability pay. Because of this, the family was unable to pay for Rita's treatments, and she eventually died. Furthermore, the financial strain caused the Monteros to lose their house as well. A month later, Gloria went into the police academy, hoping to follow in her father's footsteps. However, she continued having emotional trouble handling her father's decline and her mother's death, and she was expelled after failing a psychological exam. Afterwards, Gloria decided to seek revenge against the people responsible for her father's current living condition and her mother's death, targeting their next of kin!
Using a scoped .45-caliber Les Baer Prowler pistol stolen by Luis during another undercover operation, she first shot Detective Amanda Rollins, (Kelli Giddish), Fin's current partner with the SVU, from approximately a hundred yards away. Rollins was shot through the shoulder, but survived. Gloria then fatally shot Mark Howard, the son of her father's former lieutenant Toni Howard, who was responsible for cancelling Luis's disability pay. Next, she killed Escobar's girlfriend Ana Tejada while she was out with her son. After Luis turned himself in and claimed responsibility for the shootings to protect her, Gloria fled with a stash of guns and killed a traffic agent who ticketed her father's vehicle. Stealing a delivery van, Gloria went to an abandoned hospital in Queens, where her mother died. There, she killed a security guard and left behind a videotaped manifesto for the police to view.
Fleeing in another car, Gloria travelled to her former home, and took the family living inside hostage after waiting for the father to leave, and demanded to see Fin. When he came in and took off his bulletproof vest, she yelled at him for not staying in touch with her family and for not knowing what they were going through. Despite Fin's attempts at apologizing and admitting his guilt in not being shot instead of Luis, Gloria tries to shoot the hostages. Before she could pull the trigger, Fin tackles her and wrestles the gun out of her hand. She is then arrested and taken outside by Fin, where she is greeted by Luis. Gloria tries speaking to him, only to break down in tears before being taken into a police car while Luis watches!
The was a hot shot lawyer who took this case pro bono due too the publicity it gave him and his firm and also after his son's accidental shooting, a admitted hatred for police officers! The situation got so tense that the District Attorney offered and they accepted guilty due too mental defect and after six years in a mental criminal facility she was proven safe too enter society and paroled! While inside she was targeted by mental nurse Jeanette Owens, (Diana Scarwid) who has a daughter Ann Owens, (Alexandria Lydon) who is also a mother and a police officer! Been a mental health nurse she was able to hide the psychological damage when she and her then pregnant with her grandson daughter, were bound and gagged prisoners of escaped convicts for days in her own home!
(See Prison Break season two Episode Buried too see this awesome scene I used in my story!)
Jeanette often had Gloria put in isolation and tried her best too ruin her parole. When she was paroled however she decided that she wanted too teach Jeanette a lesson she would NEVER FORGET! Ann in what felt like a case of twisted de ja vue came home from work to find her mum tapped too a chair legs and wrists spread in her birthday suit! Jeanette tried to warn her daughter best she could trashing and grunting into her panties stuffed in her mouth and held in place with black tape wrapped around her head! 'Sweet Dreams Ann, we will have such fun when she wakes up hey mum?' Gloria laughed after knocking out Jeanette's daughter from behind!
'Well that was fun!' Gloria said after restraining Ann like her mother and making each watch the other made to orgasm after been given oral by their captor. 'I recorded it too! I also found the reports your naughty cop daughter hid that prove you should maybe be better as a patient not a nurse Jeanette?' Gloria then before leaving a knife in Ann's hands to cut her and her mum free before she left! 'I will call this and the three hundred dollars cash I have taken from this house quits! If you come after me the videos will come out and your repercussions will be your problem, not mine! Good bye ladies forever'!
'You see they never came forward! None of you pigs do!' Gloria said to Officer Carolina who she had bound, gagged and sexually humiliated the police officer who couldn't reply with the gag in her mouth! 'I not only know you coppers don't want the humiliation to come out but people who cross my employers, like you did with Ms Nicole Wallace, (Olivia D'Arbo) no it's best too keep quiet! The police so hurt me and my family! Pay back, aint it a B@TCH'!
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Remember watching this character on law and order SVU and feeling genuinely like the system and society that turned her into a killer was and if a lot of other people had done right by her dad, who was actually a hero who saved finn life! Her family also things would been very different for her as a USA solider! Another great character use mega leading to another great story open to be continued
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Thanks mate most appreciate the feedback and yes I felt the same when I watched it, kind of female modern robin hood? Will definitely use her in future stories as well mate!Thatbondageguy1983 wrote: 1 month ago Remember watching this character on law and order SVU and feeling genuinely like the system and society that turned her into a killer was and if a lot of other people had done right by her dad, who was actually a hero who saved finn life! Her family also things would been very different for her as a USA solider! Another great character use mega leading to another great story open to be continued