Plymouth. (MF+/F+) *NEW 15/02 NEW* (Finished...?)

[slackywacky]

I knew I missed something when I visited Disney. Great update.

[BlissfulMisery]

A good bit of back and forth, with some uncertainty and starts and stops mixed in. Appropriate, given the ad-hoc nature of it.

Good that things were not left up in the air between them, although as already mentioned in the text, hopefully it does not make the shoot awkward for them.

[RopeBunny]

not sure it's one of the regularly advertised 'after hours' experiences on offer at Disney

I knew I missed something when I visited Disney. Great update.

Choose a Princess, tie her up sounds like a guaranteed money maker.

Thanks everyone.

[RopeBunny]

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[GreyLord]

[mention]RopeBunny[/mention], when you are on a roll, you are one hot writer. Great episode.

[RopeBunny]

when you are on a roll, you are one hot writer. Great episode.

Thank you sir, happy to find you're enjoying my efforts

[BlissfulMisery]

Amusing to see Fayth (teasingly) point out some of the flaws in what Plymouth did at the hotel.

Once again, captures the inherent tension/awkwardness well, and highlights some of the pitfalls of mixing 'work' and 'play'. Even given their experience, things cannot help but change when the camera is rolling...

Their parting feels very 'real'; neither is exactly sure what to say, and it feels like there is something left to be said or done, but at the same time, it seems impossible to point to what that is exactly. But perhaps reading more into it then was ever intended.

[JennyTied]

This is great!

[RopeBunny]

Their parting feels very 'real'; neither is exactly sure what to say, and it feels like there is something left to be said or done

It was meant to be done this way, can't always be a super happy ending, everyone together and off into the sunset.

Thanks for commenting.

This is great!

Hey. Thanks for the comment

[RopeBunny]

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[Caesar73]

I really love that chapter, the conversation, the underlying subtext - or not so subtle subtext My favourite on this one the entry: Plymouth opening the door: Imagine what thoughts went through Sammy´s head that moment

[slackywacky]

But, halfway across the lobby, my mouth already half open, Sammy's phone buzzes.

They never learn to turn those things off. How many moments have been destroyed by a phone...
Very nice update (again). Thank you for keeping Plymouth around.

[RopeBunny]

Thank you both, next chapter won't be too far off

[BlissfulMisery]

Plymouth slowly 'corrupting' another one of the youth I see - ignoring the fact that she is quite young herself.

A good change of pace for her to interact with someone who is new, and perhaps not all that into all of the bondage (and still has some of her shame intact!); Sammy seems to be more interested in her then the ropes. A good way for her to touch base perhaps, given the intensive nature of the whole trip she is on that lends itself to over focusing on 'the work'.

They never learn to turn those things off. How many moments have been destroyed by a phone...

The true evils of technology .

Great ending with the forgetting to get the number again .

[RopeBunny]

A good change of pace for her to interact with someone who is new, and perhaps not all that into all of the bondage

A good change, I agree. Thought it would be nice to introduce a girl for Plymouth to bounce off who doesn't work in porn, and who (for now at least ) has no knowledge or interest in bondage.

[slackywacky]

has no interest in bondage.

Those people exist? Wow, what a boring life they must live

[GreyLord]

has no interest in bondage.

Those people exist? Wow, what a boring life they must live

That is even worse that people that don't drink. They wake up in the morning knowing that is the best that they are going to feel all day.

[RopeBunny]

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[RopeBunny]

Wanted to say. I'm especially proud of the final third or quarter, Brooke driving through Bristol, finding Sammy. I wrote that section in one sitting, and love how it flows.

So.

Finished?

It doesn't have to be, it may not be.

I think I'll (possibly, probably) write something else next. But, if I can come up with enough bondage shoot ideas for Plymouth, enough interesting things for Brooke and Sammy to get up to as they date and grow closer.

I could continue.

Thanks everyone for reading.

[GreyLord]

Kudos, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. So very well done. Whether you continue this tale or start another, I will be looking for your work.

[slackywacky]

Thanks everyone for reading.

It was a pleasure reading Plymouth's stories. And whether or not you come back to this story, we'll be keeping an eye out for it.

[RopeBunny]

Thank you both. Truthfully I love Plymouth too much not to come back, at some point.

A break first though, time I can spend brainstorming good shoot and so forth ideas for her. Time I'll spend on a different project.

Which I may already be writing....

[BlissfulMisery]

A great description of the sensations in the scene with Denise. Evocative. A bit outside of Plymouth's usual comfort zone, but I suppose that is expected given the nature of her work.

The bit with the note and the conversation before also helps change the tone of the scene too - her distraction mixes with her love of tight bondage for a bit of a surreal experience, and Deborah 'showing up' as Plymouth fell deeper into the role was a nice touch.

Wanted to say. I'm especially proud of the final third or quarter, Brooke driving through Bristol, finding Sammy. I wrote that section in one sitting, and love how it flows.

When reading it stood out - in a good way!

A happy ending after all, although obviously also a very open-ended one.

As has already been said by others, I am sure whatever you come up with next will be interesting.

Truthfully I love Plymouth too much not to come back, at some point.

Good to hear!

[Fandango]

Congratulations. This saga is quite an accomplishment. If this is the last that we get to read of Plymouth, then I think you've left her in a great place. If you do explore new adventures for her at some point down the road...I'll be excited for those also.

It's good to hear that you're still working on new projects though. You're very talented. You've got a narrative style that's all your own, unique from any other that I see on this site.

[Caesar73]

Kudos, @RopeBunny. So very well done. Whether you continue this tale or start another, I will be looking for your work.

I agree totally. You created a really fascinating character with Brooke!