Plymouth rising (MF+/F+)

[NotSeen]

I'd love to see (read?) Brooke doing a full-blown bondage shoot for Lili's website. Perhaps a second visit to Trevor's? And, even thought Plymouth herself might probably prefer not seeing him ever again, there could be a story in her meeting Clive again, finding out why he did what he did - and getting his comeuppance?

[RopeBunny]

1) A trip to Japan with a good introduction to shibari and kimbaku.

2) Another bondage convention where she gets tickets for her lawn maintenance coworkers. Maybe even so light play with some of them.

3) A bondage challenge between Brooke and Lili.

4) A bondage business venture with Brooke and Lili.

All good ideas, thank you.

One of these (but which ) is something I've been toying with, considering. So. Granted only a couple of you have specifically stated a wish to see more Brooke....

Or should that be more Plymouth

Regardless. Onwards we shall go. Look out for the next chapter.
Soon.

And thank you to all who've read so far, please carry on, I like to have company when I go on these trips

[tickletied84]

Wonderful story - if this was the end then it has been a wonderful story, or if there's more then I look forward to "Act Two"

[RopeBunny]

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[NotSeen]

That chapter certainly hit a lot of nails on the head. Nice to get to read how Brooke's life has moved on... and certainly enough of a tease of things to come (both regarding the ' flattened snake' thing and the project with Lili).
It's certainly a treat to get to follow this journey.

[GreyLord]

That chapter certainly hit a lot of nails on the head. Nice to get to read how Brooke's life has moved on... and certainly enough of a tease of things to come (both regarding the ' flattened snake' thing and the project with Lili).
It's certainly a treat to get to follow this journey.

[mention]NotSeen[/mention] hit the nail on the head too. Plymouth has moved on, changing from a bumbling wannabe to a solid professional. At the same time, she still projects enthusiasm freshness. Thank you, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention], for continuing this story. It had too much to offer to let it lie fallow.

[RopeBunny]

Thank you, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention], for continuing this story.

Welcome . Thank you, and you others, for letting me know you'd like to see/read more.

regarding the ' flattened snake' thing

I'm interested to see how this particular job Brooke's on is received, in the next chapter, because to my knowledge the 'snake' isn't a well known bondage kink.

[RopeBunny]

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[GreyLord]

No question, Fred is fun, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. You gave us a nice scene with Daniel. But, I am eager to getting on to the Land of the Rising Sun. What wonders will we see there? And how will the Japanese take to Plymouth's pair of Fs?

[NotSeen]

Reading that was genuinely fun - and it sounds like the future will bring even better things.

[RopeBunny]

Reading that was genuinely fun

Thanks. I had hoped it wouldn't come across as too weird.

And, yes, onwards to Japan now, to see what mischief I can cook up

[Beaumains]

Good to see this story has not ended yet. Brooke/Plymouth is really developing as a person, and the kink ball was (thankfully) not the end of her willingness to experiment. Now she seems at a much better place mentally and truly happy. Her life has slowed down in some sense, and she seems less keen to throw eveything away for her bondage career, but Lili is planning something, so that will not be tame. Great writing!

[RopeBunny]

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[GreyLord]

Your descriptions are excellent, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. This segment of your tale is particularly interesting to me because I have been in Japan. Admittedly, a long time ago, long before bullet trains. Awaiting your continuation.

I like the way Plymouth and Lili are working together. It will be interesting to see what they do.

[NotSeen]

Japan, yay! For someone who was something of a 'japanophile' in my youth, I have a hunch this'll be good (then again, there isn't much that you've written that isn't good...)

[slackywacky]

次に何が起こるのだろうか (I wonder what will happen next...)

I enjoy reading this story very much, Plymouth's growth and thoughts. Well done.

[RopeBunny]

I have been in Japan.

For someone who was something of a 'japanophile' in my youth

次に何が起こるのだろうか (I wonder what will happen next...)

No pressure then
Just don't get too mad if I make a Japanese based mistake guys.

I'm doing my research, more for this then for anything I've written before, but Google translate and Google itself (to research shibari and other random Japanese facts) aren't foolproof.
At some stage I'm bound to mix something up.

Still, all the research is proving quite the education.

[RopeBunny]

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[slackywacky]

> The problem, the comedy, derives from my being a bad student.

Some of us have trouble being students
Very nice update.

[GreyLord]

Very clear writing. This was very sensual. And it was very Japanese. Well done, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. I am left eager for the next installment.

[RopeBunny]

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[GreyLord]

This was absolutely fabulous, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. It is enough to make one smell the cherry blossoms. I have no real knowledge of shibari. But it feels authentic. I think that your research paid off very well. The ending was perfect. Brooke and Lili questing for rope to use on each other. What fun!

[NotSeen]

"Agreed." Lili nods, then grins, nudging my arm so I turn to look at her, seeing the mischief, and want, dancing in her eyes. "Can we please go and buy some rope now. B?"

I wonder if the ladies remember how shibari is looked upon by most Japanese. I can almost see them walking into a store. "Yeah, we'd like to buy some rope for tying up each other. Shibari, y'know?" For many locals it's unnerving enough to see their ink, let alone...
But I'm sure you'll come up with something even better than my musings. You always do. No pressure

[slackywacky]

Damn... I wished these videos Plymouth is in are real.
Great update, hope they find some rope on the way back to the hotel.

[Dpsiic]

Your writing is just amazing