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Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F) (Final part added)
Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2020 11:31 pm
by Raine
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Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F)
Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2020 11:47 pm
by GagHerRealGood
Loving this story so far. I like how conversational the narration is, and the setting and characters feel very real. Looking forward to the rest!
Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F)
Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2020 4:13 am
by Bandit666
I have to agree I’m looking forward to reading more of this tale as it works so well and the narrative seems just right
Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F)
Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2020 7:21 am
by Beaumains
This story is written perfectly. The odd narration style works great and truly builds the tension. Amazing job!
Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F)
Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2020 8:24 am
by Dpsiic
What a great story thank you.
Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F)
Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2020 8:26 am
by wolfman
Really fantastic start, the scene is well and truly set and Regan sense of doom is palpable. Looking forward to seeing more of this tale as it unfolds.
Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F)
Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2020 7:06 am
by Raine
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Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F) (Part 2 added)
Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2020 11:39 am
by Bandit666
Great second part you’re keeping the story going well fun, in a kinky way, naughty and with first class narration
Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F) (Part 2 added)
Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2020 1:12 pm
by Beaumains
Loving this! Great conflicting feelings. I've such a feeling that Lee is either a complete asshole, or secretly loves Regan, making them create a pretty strong bond this night. Keep it up!
Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F) (Part 2 added)
Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2020 1:30 pm
by Tieup1
Loving this, great story, well written. I can feel that girl's pain, at her dignity being stripped away.

Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F) (Part 2 added)
Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2020 2:59 pm
by GagHerRealGood
So sexy! I love it so far, can't wait to see where this night goes...
Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F) (Part 2 added)
Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2020 11:19 pm
by RopingRingers
Very interesting so far

not gonna lie though, if I were in her shoes and someone I knew walked in, I would be a GHOST, gone, Number Five'd OUTTA dere

can't wait for the next part

Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F)
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2020 4:11 pm
by redlukas
Raine wrote: 4 years ago
it was just sex. People made mistakes like that all the time. It didn't have to mean anything if I didn't let it.
Foreshadowing?

Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F) (Part 2 added)
Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2020 11:56 pm
by tickletied84
Wonderful first two parts to the story [mention]Raine[/mention] Looking forward to seeing how defiant she gets before she tells Lee to screw it!
Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F) (Part 2 added)
Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2020 2:57 pm
by slackywacky
Wonderful story. Great writing. Keep going...
Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F) (Part 2 added)
Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2020 6:34 am
by Raine
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Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F) (Final part added)
Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2020 7:08 am
by RopingRingers
That was a very gripping and interesting little tale

I honestly don't know who I envy more - Lee or Regan. I need to move somewhere with clubs like that

Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F) (Final part added)
Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2020 10:49 pm
by TomYi
I really like this. You were very consistent and committed with your narration from Regan's bitter POV. Very well written, I hope that great creativity of yours produces more stories for us to enjoy!
Re: Under New Ownership (F/F, M/F) (Final part added)
Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2021 2:17 am
by DioA
Wow…wow…wow. I haven’t read anything like this. While I’m relived for Regan, I’m sad to see it end.