The Repossessor (F/F) - Story 6
Posted: Wed Feb 12, 2025 12:53 pm
The Repossessor
In each of these brief vignettes, a victim narrates her encounter with "The Repossessor," a girl of whom some already had the privilege of being a friend and others a stranger. At the end of each of the stories, though, the victim wishes she had paid her debts. I am trying to work with various narration styles to get a feel for different characters and see which ones provide the best narration in this kind of story. Your criticisms of the voices (especially if they come across as too similar) is much appreciated as this story is experimental for me. Many thanks for reading!
STORY 1: Missy Mischief Meets the Repossessor
Zip! Glide! Speed! The motorcycle casually races along the highway. I'm not speeding, but it still looks thrilling through the GoPro strapped to my friend Genevieve's chest. Genevieve rides as my passenger as we go along, the wind blowing my wavy blonde locks behind me as I speed along the road. The royal blue Kawasaki Ninja is my baby, my new baby, and I treat her like an absolute gem. She set me back many hard-earned dollars, but she is worth every single penny. I may have done something dirty, though, and wound up getting his bike for, well, free.
I love sport bikes. With my last bike, I used to gear up and do track days on a racing course, and I never have felt so much energy like I did on those rounds. Every track day, I'm there, and I'm a sight just because I'm a girl and I ride with both confidence and a desire to be a great-grandma. My grandparents would be pretty upset if I got killed doing something stupid on a bike. My dear readers, please ride responsibly. Wouldn't it be awful if I turned myself into burger and gristle? I stop the bike in front of the house, and we get off and take off our helmets.
I don't want to become ground meat, and neither does Genevieve. That's why we have good old fashioned protection! I mean we're wearing jeans, black combat boots, and black leather jackets for thick padding. We're very similar, by my request. We both have leather skirts over our jeans, but Genevieve's is red while mine is black. I've got a white crop top tank top, but she has a gray crop top t-shirt. I'm rocking a blue bandana headband, but hers is red. Freaking stylish, yeah?
"That was a great ride. Thank you," Gen's French accent is cute, "My boyfriend sold you this?"
"Thanks. Yeah. It's a sweet ride and a sweet deal," I am practically bouncing to the front door.
Genevieve is a big strong girl. She is so sleek and feminine, though, and I wish I could carry my femininity so well. Her dark brown hair is so sexy with the effects of the helmet, but we both are a little vain about our hair and fluff it out to undo the helmet head. We run our fingers through it in an attempt to undo any wind-blown snarls. We also adjust our tops. Today, we're wearing our cute navel piercings, Gen's featuring those emeralds and mine a cheap sapphire that matches my bandana. Unlike Genevieve, I have several of these to wear whereas she has only one.
Just as I open the door, everything goes straight to hell in a handbasket. Genevieve's arm wraps around my chest, and her other hand gags me. Her grip is tight and heartless. Fear seizes me. I am in deep trouble, because frankly I just cannot do anything about this big French girl's ability to bench press twice my weight. She is going to compress my lungs.
"Missy, you bought this bike off my boyfriend, and your check bounced at the bank."
Then, she shoves me into the house, shuts the door, and deadbolts the door. Her leather satchel is a bit ominous. She reaches out and grabs me. Effortlessly, she pulls my coat off me and makes a striptease out of an already awful situation, but I'm wearing nothing under my top at the moment because I'm kinky! Seriously, sister, what else are you going to take that is mine and not yours. First, you say you're stealing my bike, and then you steal my coat. Ummm… what is that coil of white rope for, and why do you casually have white rope in your satchel anyway?
"I'm going to tie you up while I figure out how you'll pay my boyfriend. Understood?"
"Gosh, ummm, I don't know… dunno how that happened," I sputter the words.
"You know what you did," she snarls, spins me around, and ties my wrists together.
"Hey, no need for this!" I cry out, "Surely we can work something out."
"Yes, Missy, let's play a game. It's called Repossession!" her voice is awfully sinister.
"Damn you!" I rarely curse, "Untie me right now! This… why… this is illegal!"
Yeah, like I don't know that I screwed them over, right? I thought I'd pass a check on an empty account and get the bike for nothing. Am I a punk or what? Maybe I kind of deserve this as an act of vengeance for what I did? I am in really hot water now; I'm screwed. She is even tying my elbows together, and with it she is reducing my chances of escape.
She picks me up and throws me onto the table now. Genevieve's really mad, and she takes it all out on me, using some more white rope to tie my ankles together and even wrapping the rope in my heels so that I cannot get the boots off. This is an awful situation. She's not being reasonable about this at all! Maybe I could just, I dunno, write a check that won't bounce? She ties more of the white rope on either side of my knees.
"C'mon! I… I wasn't trying… to bounce the check," maybe I am being dishonest?
"You are a pathetic liar," Gen tightly gags me with a knotted green bandana, the fabric pulling tightly against my skin. She knots it behind my head with speed, efficiency, and tightness.
"No! Hleathe hon'h hu thith!" I am pathetically begging for freedom at this point, "Ah'll hay!"
Genevieve callously ignores me, taking another rope and tying a breast harness to accentuate my bust, and she cinches it tightly so that it also restrains my arms. She is one angry girl! There is no sweet talking my way out of this anymore. I am trapped. She takes out a roll of duct tape to wrap my face. The black tape takes away what little intelligibility I had left. She then takes out one last rope and puts me in a hogtie upon the table. Excuse me? She exposes my boobs, too!
"As much as I'd love to stay and play with your bust, I have a bike to reclaim."
"Mmmmmmm!" I try to say more, but I sure can't right about now. She pinches my nipples.
With that, Gen shows me the keys, "Don't contact us until you have real money. See you around, sport," and then she shuts the door, leaving me hogtied and gagged by myself.
I struggle against the ropes as best as I can, but it is useless. Outside, I watch Genevieve roll the bike up onto her boyfriend's waiting trailer. She waves farewell to me before the truck drives away with my bike and without me. I can only wail in protest, but, even just in the front yard, I am not heard. I continue to pathetically struggle for several minutes until I hear the sound of the front door unlocking and the voices of my roommates as the scene fades out…
END OF STORY 1
In each of these brief vignettes, a victim narrates her encounter with "The Repossessor," a girl of whom some already had the privilege of being a friend and others a stranger. At the end of each of the stories, though, the victim wishes she had paid her debts. I am trying to work with various narration styles to get a feel for different characters and see which ones provide the best narration in this kind of story. Your criticisms of the voices (especially if they come across as too similar) is much appreciated as this story is experimental for me. Many thanks for reading!
STORY 1: Missy Mischief Meets the Repossessor
Zip! Glide! Speed! The motorcycle casually races along the highway. I'm not speeding, but it still looks thrilling through the GoPro strapped to my friend Genevieve's chest. Genevieve rides as my passenger as we go along, the wind blowing my wavy blonde locks behind me as I speed along the road. The royal blue Kawasaki Ninja is my baby, my new baby, and I treat her like an absolute gem. She set me back many hard-earned dollars, but she is worth every single penny. I may have done something dirty, though, and wound up getting his bike for, well, free.
I love sport bikes. With my last bike, I used to gear up and do track days on a racing course, and I never have felt so much energy like I did on those rounds. Every track day, I'm there, and I'm a sight just because I'm a girl and I ride with both confidence and a desire to be a great-grandma. My grandparents would be pretty upset if I got killed doing something stupid on a bike. My dear readers, please ride responsibly. Wouldn't it be awful if I turned myself into burger and gristle? I stop the bike in front of the house, and we get off and take off our helmets.
I don't want to become ground meat, and neither does Genevieve. That's why we have good old fashioned protection! I mean we're wearing jeans, black combat boots, and black leather jackets for thick padding. We're very similar, by my request. We both have leather skirts over our jeans, but Genevieve's is red while mine is black. I've got a white crop top tank top, but she has a gray crop top t-shirt. I'm rocking a blue bandana headband, but hers is red. Freaking stylish, yeah?
"That was a great ride. Thank you," Gen's French accent is cute, "My boyfriend sold you this?"
"Thanks. Yeah. It's a sweet ride and a sweet deal," I am practically bouncing to the front door.
Genevieve is a big strong girl. She is so sleek and feminine, though, and I wish I could carry my femininity so well. Her dark brown hair is so sexy with the effects of the helmet, but we both are a little vain about our hair and fluff it out to undo the helmet head. We run our fingers through it in an attempt to undo any wind-blown snarls. We also adjust our tops. Today, we're wearing our cute navel piercings, Gen's featuring those emeralds and mine a cheap sapphire that matches my bandana. Unlike Genevieve, I have several of these to wear whereas she has only one.
Just as I open the door, everything goes straight to hell in a handbasket. Genevieve's arm wraps around my chest, and her other hand gags me. Her grip is tight and heartless. Fear seizes me. I am in deep trouble, because frankly I just cannot do anything about this big French girl's ability to bench press twice my weight. She is going to compress my lungs.
"Missy, you bought this bike off my boyfriend, and your check bounced at the bank."
Then, she shoves me into the house, shuts the door, and deadbolts the door. Her leather satchel is a bit ominous. She reaches out and grabs me. Effortlessly, she pulls my coat off me and makes a striptease out of an already awful situation, but I'm wearing nothing under my top at the moment because I'm kinky! Seriously, sister, what else are you going to take that is mine and not yours. First, you say you're stealing my bike, and then you steal my coat. Ummm… what is that coil of white rope for, and why do you casually have white rope in your satchel anyway?
"I'm going to tie you up while I figure out how you'll pay my boyfriend. Understood?"
"Gosh, ummm, I don't know… dunno how that happened," I sputter the words.
"You know what you did," she snarls, spins me around, and ties my wrists together.
"Hey, no need for this!" I cry out, "Surely we can work something out."
"Yes, Missy, let's play a game. It's called Repossession!" her voice is awfully sinister.
"Damn you!" I rarely curse, "Untie me right now! This… why… this is illegal!"
Yeah, like I don't know that I screwed them over, right? I thought I'd pass a check on an empty account and get the bike for nothing. Am I a punk or what? Maybe I kind of deserve this as an act of vengeance for what I did? I am in really hot water now; I'm screwed. She is even tying my elbows together, and with it she is reducing my chances of escape.
She picks me up and throws me onto the table now. Genevieve's really mad, and she takes it all out on me, using some more white rope to tie my ankles together and even wrapping the rope in my heels so that I cannot get the boots off. This is an awful situation. She's not being reasonable about this at all! Maybe I could just, I dunno, write a check that won't bounce? She ties more of the white rope on either side of my knees.
"C'mon! I… I wasn't trying… to bounce the check," maybe I am being dishonest?
"You are a pathetic liar," Gen tightly gags me with a knotted green bandana, the fabric pulling tightly against my skin. She knots it behind my head with speed, efficiency, and tightness.
"No! Hleathe hon'h hu thith!" I am pathetically begging for freedom at this point, "Ah'll hay!"
Genevieve callously ignores me, taking another rope and tying a breast harness to accentuate my bust, and she cinches it tightly so that it also restrains my arms. She is one angry girl! There is no sweet talking my way out of this anymore. I am trapped. She takes out a roll of duct tape to wrap my face. The black tape takes away what little intelligibility I had left. She then takes out one last rope and puts me in a hogtie upon the table. Excuse me? She exposes my boobs, too!
"As much as I'd love to stay and play with your bust, I have a bike to reclaim."
"Mmmmmmm!" I try to say more, but I sure can't right about now. She pinches my nipples.
With that, Gen shows me the keys, "Don't contact us until you have real money. See you around, sport," and then she shuts the door, leaving me hogtied and gagged by myself.
I struggle against the ropes as best as I can, but it is useless. Outside, I watch Genevieve roll the bike up onto her boyfriend's waiting trailer. She waves farewell to me before the truck drives away with my bike and without me. I can only wail in protest, but, even just in the front yard, I am not heard. I continue to pathetically struggle for several minutes until I hear the sound of the front door unlocking and the voices of my roommates as the scene fades out…
END OF STORY 1