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Posted: Thu May 25, 2023 12:58 pm
by AlexUSA3
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Re: Her Best Summer Ever B (F/F, F/M, M/F)
Posted: Thu May 25, 2023 9:43 pm
by Lucky Lottie
A lovely start, keen to see what happens on their trip.
Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F)
Posted: Wed May 31, 2023 3:51 am
by hafnermg
Nice a camping trip with Caleigh this will be good!
Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 2 (Jun. 1, 2023)
Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2023 11:41 am
by AlexUSA3
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Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 2 (Jun. 7, 2023)
Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2023 7:06 pm
by AlexUSA3
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Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 3 (Jun. 9, 2023)
Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2023 12:06 pm
by AlexUSA3
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Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 4 (Jun. 16, 2023)
Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2023 3:28 pm
by Lucky Lottie
Another great addition. I can see things getting interesting down the track.
Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 4 (Jun. 16, 2023)
Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2023 3:46 pm
by Busy Damsel
This is a very good first chapter...looking forward to reading more....
Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 4 (Jun. 16, 2023)
Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2023 11:32 am
by AlexUSA3
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Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 5 (Jun. 21, 2023)
Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2023 8:42 pm
by Lucky Lottie
Great chapter. Nice to see their different personalities coming out.
Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 5 (Jun. 21, 2023)
Posted: Sun Jun 25, 2023 12:30 am
by AlexUSA3
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Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 6 (Jun. 24, 2023)
Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2023 12:35 pm
by AlexUSA3
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Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 7 (Jun. 29, 2023)
Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2023 5:13 pm
by Lucky Lottie
It'll be interesting to see if this tension over a new friend will turn sweet or sour. The current predicament is rather mild, I do wonder what'll happen if she can't escape?
Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 7 (Jun. 29, 2023)
Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2023 6:16 pm
by AlexUSA3
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Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 8 (Jul. 2, 2023)
Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2023 9:16 pm
by Mineira1986
I liked chapters 4 and 5. The dunking sounds dangerous, but it was portrayed in a (sort of) playful way. Turning a prisoner into a pack animal sounds fun to write. I would've loved more than one chapter about that. Personally, I would've made them drag the logs instead of carrying them, but it worked!
Last chapter was very emotional. Looks good to have a pause, since most chapters are heavily packed with action.
Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 8 (Jul. 2, 2023)
Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2023 11:56 pm
by AlexUSA3
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Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 9 (Jul. 5, 2023)
Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2023 12:24 am
by AlexUSA3
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Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 10 (Jul. 8, 2023)
Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2023 5:15 am
by Lucky Lottie
Love it! Setting up for a serious bit of revenge.
Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 10 (Jul. 8, 2023)
Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2023 12:42 am
by Mineira1986
Eva just might be asking to be tied up, because she's gone crazy with Caleigh and Janie. I'd love to see Caleigh-Janie action, since they are supposed to be the older friendship, but I think we'll have to wait. Because of Eva.
Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 10 (Jul. 8, 2023)
Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2023 12:07 pm
by AlexUSA3
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Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 11 (Jul. 11, 2023)
Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2023 12:48 pm
by AlexUSA3
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Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 12 (Jul. 14, 2023)
Posted: Sat Jul 15, 2023 12:23 am
by hafnermg
I can't wait to see how Caleigh is tested by Eva this time. Maybe this will be the time Eva finds something strict enough to hold even Caleigh! Keep up the great work!
Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 12 (Jul. 14, 2023)
Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2023 11:40 am
by AlexUSA3
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Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 13 (Jul. 18, 2023)
Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2023 12:37 am
by Lucky Lottie
A nice chapter. The girls are all learning more about themselves.
Re: Camping Trip! (F/F, F/M, M/F) - Chapter 13 (Jul. 18, 2023)
Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2023 1:00 pm
by AlexUSA3
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