great.You're right. Seems funny as a TUGs lover to think it, but there are some who wouldn't take kindly to wandering in on a naked busty tied up girl.
For some, like our poor hotel cleaner, this would count as a bad day
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Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (MF+/F+) (FINISHED) (NEW story coming soon)
All good then, excellent great.
You're right. Seems funny as a TUGs lover to think it, but there are some who wouldn't take kindly to wandering in on a naked busty tied up girl.
For some, like our poor hotel cleaner, this would count as a bad day
great.You're right. Seems funny as a TUGs lover to think it, but there are some who wouldn't take kindly to wandering in on a naked busty tied up girl.
For some, like our poor hotel cleaner, this would count as a bad day
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Catching up with most of your work!
This is the best! Love Plymouth as a character! Story is sexy as hell!
This is the best! Love Plymouth as a character! Story is sexy as hell!
Thanks
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Deborah certainly knows how to play the game well, teasing poor Brooke until she cannot take it anymore.
Of course the denial makes the end result even sweeter... And of course, reminds Plymouth of exactly who is in charge...
A bit excessive to get a body modification off just a few words, but again, that is the trajectory Plymouth is headed down... The question being when will she finally hit the ground? One cannot fly on forever...
Great chapter as usual...
Of course the denial makes the end result even sweeter... And of course, reminds Plymouth of exactly who is in charge...
A bit excessive to get a body modification off just a few words, but again, that is the trajectory Plymouth is headed down... The question being when will she finally hit the ground? One cannot fly on forever...
Well described... Exhilaratingly painful.RopeBunny wrote: 2 years ago Then laughing as I pout. Deborah tuts, leans forwards, and casually flicks one of my nipples.
And.
"Fuuuuuuuucccck." Hissed out of me as pain explodes across my breast. "You. Ouch."
Great chapter as usual...
It is soon/quick for piercings, for that level. But I'm trying not to drag the story out, which means things happening relatively fast.BlissfulMisery wrote: 2 years ago A bit excessive to get a body modification off just a few words, but again, that is the trajectory Plymouth is headed down... The question being when will she finally hit the ground? One cannot fly on forever
I'd rather go shorter and more focused more fun then spend several chapters working Brooke and Deborah's dynamic up to this point.
And.
Yes.
Maybe.
Of course, since the tale is mine I already know, and I shan't spoil.
But.
The potential is there for a fall, just as the reverse and many other possibilities exist too.
All will become clear in the end of course.
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Another great chapter. Love the idea of Plymouth being kept tied all night, every night…except I suspect we have another twist on the horizon….
Love your style of writing - it amplifies Plymouth’s indecision and impaired judgement (when horny)!
Love your style of writing - it amplifies Plymouth’s indecision and impaired judgement (when horny)!
Always room/time for another twistSwitchgirl wrote: 2 years ago Love the idea of Plymouth being kept tied all night, every night…except I suspect we have another twist on the horizon….
Unless there isn't....
Or maybe there is....
Sorry. Thanks for commenting.
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Hey, yet another great chapter.
Where Plymouth learns that brattiness does not pay (or maybe does, depending on how you look at it?). And Deborah certainly puts the new rings though their paces...
Wonder if Elwood will end up having to be her knight in shining armor, at the rate she is going. Or at least he might need to make another attempt to talk some sense into her, because at this point, play is interfering with work.
Where Plymouth learns that brattiness does not pay (or maybe does, depending on how you look at it?). And Deborah certainly puts the new rings though their paces...
Wonder if Elwood will end up having to be her knight in shining armor, at the rate she is going. Or at least he might need to make another attempt to talk some sense into her, because at this point, play is interfering with work.
Sums up the chapter pretty well... Great line.
Quite intriguing chapter. Intense. You chapter Beverly´s emotions to well. Your style reflects that. Fascinating
You chose a good line there
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Well, she is completely lost in the experience. Daydreams, actual dreams, every thought is inundated by her desire to submit. And of course, in such a state, everything just feeds into itself in a self reinforcing loop. Everything becomes amazing, good, wonderful, makes one fall even deeper into it...
I will not repeat some variation of what I have said many times before about the possible end results.
But I will say this: I am concerned that while Deborah definitely knows how to get Plymouth to where she wants to go, I just do not think (and based on what Deborah herself said before, she does not seem to think so either), Deborah knows how to properly and safely guide her back out into reality. Which can obviously lead to problems.
But to be clear, that is not meant as a criticism. Indeed there would be no story if there was no tension and nothing 'happened'.
On a slightly more light-hearted note; seems Deborah did indeed find some words to call Plymouth
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Great chapter, as usual.
I will not repeat some variation of what I have said many times before about the possible end results.
But I will say this: I am concerned that while Deborah definitely knows how to get Plymouth to where she wants to go, I just do not think (and based on what Deborah herself said before, she does not seem to think so either), Deborah knows how to properly and safely guide her back out into reality. Which can obviously lead to problems.
But to be clear, that is not meant as a criticism. Indeed there would be no story if there was no tension and nothing 'happened'.
On a slightly more light-hearted note; seems Deborah did indeed find some words to call Plymouth
.Great chapter, as usual.
She (Deborah) said she likely would, in the heat of the momentBlissfulMisery wrote: 2 years ago
On a slightly more light-hearted note; seems Deborah did indeed find some words to call Plymouth
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Hey, great chapter as usual.
Well, Plymouth seems insatiable. One would think after the previous day/night she might be content for at least a day, or perhaps have some regrets or second thoughts (certainly even Deborah had some) but...
The 'revolving door' on her front porch was pretty amusing as it seemed like everyone just came and went as they pleased (and Plymouth was all on board with it).
Elwood is, unsurprisingly, concerned due to all that he has seen and heard. So far all indications are he will end up having to save Plymouth from herself.
What I find interesting (although I am not sure if it is actually intended to come off this way as I might just be reading into things) is that Brooke's prior relationships were, well, more normal. They did involve bondage of course, but it usually went back and forth, and ultimately the core of those relationships was based on love and affection.
But they also tended to end poorly one way or another.
It seems like now she is no longer interested in affection and love. She just wants the bondage, the play, the submission, and she does not seem picky about where she gets it from. Obviously I've mentioned how that is not healthy in a 'physical' way, but now I am starting to think there is a mental aspect to it. It is like she has given up, in a way, and now just wants to satisfy her desires as quickly and expediently as possible.
Just a thought.
Well, Plymouth seems insatiable. One would think after the previous day/night she might be content for at least a day, or perhaps have some regrets or second thoughts (certainly even Deborah had some) but...
The 'revolving door' on her front porch was pretty amusing as it seemed like everyone just came and went as they pleased (and Plymouth was all on board with it).
Elwood is, unsurprisingly, concerned due to all that he has seen and heard. So far all indications are he will end up having to save Plymouth from herself.
What I find interesting (although I am not sure if it is actually intended to come off this way as I might just be reading into things) is that Brooke's prior relationships were, well, more normal. They did involve bondage of course, but it usually went back and forth, and ultimately the core of those relationships was based on love and affection.
But they also tended to end poorly one way or another.
It seems like now she is no longer interested in affection and love. She just wants the bondage, the play, the submission, and she does not seem picky about where she gets it from. Obviously I've mentioned how that is not healthy in a 'physical' way, but now I am starting to think there is a mental aspect to it. It is like she has given up, in a way, and now just wants to satisfy her desires as quickly and expediently as possible.
Just a thought.
Wiped that part of your reply in this quote, but I'm glad you enjoyed the 'revolving door' of comings and goings all whilst Plymouth stood bound.BlissfulMisery wrote: 2 years ago
What I find interesting (although I am not sure if it is actually intended to come off this way as I might just be reading into things) is that Brooke's prior relationships were, well, more normal. They did involve bondage of course, but it usually went back and forth, and ultimately the core of those relationships was based on love and affection.
But they also tended to end poorly one way or another.
It seems like now she is no longer interested in affection and love. She just wants the bondage, the play, the submission, and she does not seem picky about where she gets it from. Obviously I've mentioned how that is not healthy in a 'physical' way, but now I am starting to think there is a mental aspect to it. It is like she has given up, in a way, and now just wants to satisfy her desires as quickly and expediently as possible.
This though, what I did capture in the quotes, is a good observation. But I don't want to say any more. I'd love to comment properly on your comment, but fear to do so could give things away or hint at things.
What I will say is I'm glad the change is noted, that Brooke does indeed seem to care only for the bondage now, almost to the point of obsessing over submitting. That she's stopped wanting more normal things.
I hope you'll continue to follow, as there is a conclusion, answers, out there.
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I mean, I was more stating observations. Not expecting spoilers (nor do I want them). So I completely understand and respect staying quiet.
But I think the biggest tipping point was when she blew off her appointment with Elwood. Technically Deborah kind of did that, but Plymouth had no problem with it (and never mentioned it later), and she did know it was that day and that it would likely play out that way if she went.
As they say, one of the markers of an addiction (and what makes it different from having a passion for something) is when it starts to consume the rest of one's life (no longer carrying out responsibilities/keeping commitments in order to satisfy the addiction).
But I think the biggest tipping point was when she blew off her appointment with Elwood. Technically Deborah kind of did that, but Plymouth had no problem with it (and never mentioned it later), and she did know it was that day and that it would likely play out that way if she went.
As they say, one of the markers of an addiction (and what makes it different from having a passion for something) is when it starts to consume the rest of one's life (no longer carrying out responsibilities/keeping commitments in order to satisfy the addiction).
Plan to!RopeBunny wrote: 2 years ago I hope you'll continue to follow, as there is a conclusion, answers, out there.
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Hey,
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Interesting power play by Deborah.
Maybe I missed it but not sure where Tasha introduced herself to Plymouth. Seemed she just knew her name out of hand.
Either way, looks like Plymouth is finding more play partners. Deborah seems surprisingly nonchalant about it.
I like that description
.Interesting power play by Deborah.
Maybe I missed it but not sure where Tasha introduced herself to Plymouth. Seemed she just knew her name out of hand.
Either way, looks like Plymouth is finding more play partners. Deborah seems surprisingly nonchalant about it.
Supposed to be one of those 'happened off camera' moments.BlissfulMisery wrote: 2 years ago
Maybe I missed it but not sure where Tasha introduced herself to Plymouth. Seemed she just knew her name out of hand.
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I did get that, but while I was reading I ended up doing a double (and then triple) take and rereading the whole passage multiple times to see if I missed something because it seemed to just jump over the fact and it was very confusing for a minute. I assume you were trying to save on pointless words, but I feel like a short line about how they exchanged contact information to facilitate meeting up or something would have helped smooth things out.
But it is likely I am just being picky, and either way it is true it does not really change anything. Probably should not have brought it up at all.
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Kind of jumped ahead a bit. Except not really, because as you can see I'm about to go back and tell a tale.
Or at least Plymouth is.
This. All that I'm trying to do here. Well. It's a story I liked when I thought it up. But it's proved hard to write at times.
The trouble is I like Plymouth. I want her to be safe. In many ways I feel a connection with her, as silly as it may sound when I write this story I'm kind of living her life in my head.
Which is why writing the bad parts (Deborah and the slide down into being owned) has been hard at times.
That's why I'm doing it this way, cutting some of what I planned out, but the overall effect will be the same.
I hope you'll all carry on with me.
Thanks.
Or at least Plymouth is.
This. All that I'm trying to do here. Well. It's a story I liked when I thought it up. But it's proved hard to write at times.
The trouble is I like Plymouth. I want her to be safe. In many ways I feel a connection with her, as silly as it may sound when I write this story I'm kind of living her life in my head.
Which is why writing the bad parts (Deborah and the slide down into being owned) has been hard at times.
That's why I'm doing it this way, cutting some of what I planned out, but the overall effect will be the same.
I hope you'll all carry on with me.
Thanks.