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Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER FEB 05*

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2025 8:49 am
by Tsuhaya
Hot chapter! Seems like there's no escape for poor Sammy. One torture ends, and another begins. It makes me realize how amazing your writing is because, if I'm not mistaken, this is the third time Sammy has been forced to sniff socks and shoes (not counting when he was stuffed in Brody's bag). This shows how you can really immerse us in the story; we don't even notice that Sammy has only suffered a bit so far :twisted:.

I'm glad Sammy got rid of the plug gag, but I'm almost sure something much stinkier is coming his way. The scene with Matt and Chad was incredible!

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER FEB 05*

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2025 8:56 am
by OrdinaryWorld
Tsuhaya wrote: 5 months ago if I'm not mistaken, this is the third time Sammy has been forced to sniff socks and shoes
You see, this is what I thought too but apparently it might only be three including Brody's bag? At least that's what our dearest author said in terms of separate bondage sessions. Maybe there's been a different number of bondage sessions and forced sniffings? It gets a bit confusing haha

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER FEB 05*

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2025 9:12 am
by squirrel
How disappointing that the jocks decided to remove Sammy's perfect gag from his mouth... On the other hand, if it was really causing problems, they did a good thing; plus, now that the prisoner's oral cavity is available again, who knows what kind of stuffing will he have to endure... :twisted:

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER FEB 05*

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2025 9:39 am
by bondagefreak
@Tsuhaya @OrdinaryWorld
Don't hesitate to use the CHAPTER INDEX if you need your memories jogged, guys. I've kept it up to date, allowing you and everyone else easy access to all 25 chapters that have been featured so far. Sammy's plights seem unending, but that's in large part due to the story's lengthy production time and the narrator's verbose writing.

To put things into perspective, only an hour has passed since Mark's first meeting with Andrew. That was ten chapters ago! Sammy has been fully strapped down to the gurney for barely a half-hour at this point. The narration is snail-paced, making everything seem longer than it really is. The "unending torture" perspective changes rather significantly if the story is read in one sitting.

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER FEB 05*

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2025 10:20 am
by ShadowHusky
I've been away for a while, and I'd been meaning to catch up on this... And I'm VERY intrigued already!

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER FEB 05*

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2025 10:44 am
by GoBucks
Cannot wait to see which appetizing piece of clothing gets picked as the new gag!

Wonder if we'll have more wrestling amongst the jocks to have their gear chosen :lol:

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER SEPT 24*

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2025 12:19 pm
by ShadowHusky
bondagefreak wrote: 10 months ago
*CHARACTER ORGANOGRAM*

FOR THOSE WHO MAY HAVE MISSED THIS AND/OR ARE LESS FAMILIAR WITH MY STORIES, ALL OF THE COLLEGE-AGE GUYS IN MY TALES RESIDE IN THE SAME APARTMENT COMPLEX. THEIR DIFFERENT LIVING ARRANGEMENTS HAVE ALREADY BEEN DESCRIBED IN GREAT DETAIL (IN VARIOUS STORIES), BUT THIS ORGANOGRAM SHOULD SUM IT UP & BREAK IT DOWN NICELY.


QUESTION FOR THE READERS
THE RECENCY OF THIS TALE MAY SKEW THE ANSWERS A BIT, BUT GIVEN WHAT YOU KNOW OF THE CHARACTERS, WHICH APARTMENT NUMBER WOULD YOU CHOSE TO RESIDE IN? SHARE YOUR ANSWERS IN THE COMMENTS.
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APARTMENT NO.1

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An incredibly difficult choice.

I am already finding the instinctual leadership of Chad very endearing, along with the silent sweet brutality of Hunter. Matt has a certain appeal with his charming lethality, but despite my love for Brody's reek; I just don't mesh well with his brutish personality.

In Apartment 2, Ryan was charming but Blake wasn't my cup of tea; I do find Corey unbelievably attractive though.

In 3; I am always going to be drawn to Shawn as we have been paired together many a time by you and myself; Chris has a charming straight man allure, Big Mike is such a sweety and I love that from him, and Joey is suave and hot...

And finally, Apartment 4; I think Kyle is so hot, but his distant, cold nature is not my cup of tea. I don't like Phil, I find him annoying and bratty; Joshua I enjoy as a person, less so as a dom; and Andrew I feel the same, but maybe a bit more as a dom.

With that in mind, I feel like the unpredictability of Apartment 1 has a solid edge that I am leaning on.

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *UPDATE OCT 23*

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2025 12:47 pm
by ShadowHusky
bondagefreak wrote: 9 months ago @socjuc Some things are best left to the imagination, my overly nerdy and very analytical friend 8-) Nah, but more seriously, it's not exactly an oversight. I've been asked by @Footsub123 and a few others why we haven't seen Mark yet. I've admittedly been a bit divided on the idea, but have, for the time being, decided to keep him unillustrated.

My two main reasons are as follows, and this is not to insult or diminish anyone; Thanks to growing up with social media and TikTok-style platforms, GenZ readers have generally shown shorter attention spans than Millennial or GenX readers. Many of them read much faster than we do, and their absorption rate is lesser, leading to a lessened comprehension and a lessened understanding of the material that was just read. Yes, it's an over-generalisation, but countless studies have shown this to be true. GenAlpha is unsurprisingly said to be even worse as far as attention span and reading go. That's sorta why I've been encouraging slower reading and adherence to line spacing and punctuation in more recent years.

This may sound stupid, but with more and more GenZ readers flocking to the forum, I've decided to tweak some of my more recent tales. Basically; shorter chapters and added focus on fewer characters. While important to the storyline, I've decided to keep Mark as a sort of passive narrator. He's there, but he's not the main focus. His four buddies is where most of the focus should be at.

Depending on where this tale goes (I've already extended it well beyond its original scope due to popular demand) and whether or not we get sequel(s) like we did for Easy Prey, Mark may get more spotlight as well as a more proper introduction. For now, I merely want him to serve as the eyes and ears of the readers. Hope this makes sense. Either way, the next chapter is coming out in just a few hours!
Gen Z/Millennial cusp here. I have traits of both, if I'm honest. Part of that may be due to my ADHD and waning attention span, but I have basically all of your stories, so there is something to be said about that. I do appreciate your analytical view on how you engage your stories to appeal to the wider demographic, it's fascinating to see.

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M)

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2025 12:55 pm
by ShadowHusky
I really liked reading about Andrew from this side, it was nice to get some one on one time with him. It's definitely made me appreciate him a lot more, and I forgot how bad his feet reeked haha

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M)

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2025 1:10 pm
by ShadowHusky
bondagefreak wrote: 8 months ago He left the room after a few seconds; the wet slurping of his footsteps leaving little doubt as to the moistness of his derangingly large soles.
Okay... That is an obscenely hot visual.

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M)

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2025 1:57 pm
by OrdinaryWorld
ShadowHusky wrote: 5 months ago
bondagefreak wrote: 8 months ago He left the room after a few seconds; the wet slurping of his footsteps leaving little doubt as to the moistness of his derangingly large soles.
Okay... That is an obscenely hot visual.
Agreed, lmfao.
We're very lucky to have such a talented writer among our ranks!

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER FEB 05*

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2025 7:17 pm
by ChairBoy
Before I read this chapter, wanted to say thank you for writing :D

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER FEB 05*

Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2025 7:28 pm
by Subboi
So the gag is being removed. Sounds like Sammy is in for a long night. Hopefully his mouth will be put to good use while free.

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER DEC 17*

Posted: Thu Feb 06, 2025 5:10 am
by ShadowHusky
bondagefreak wrote: 7 months ago
* READER QUESTION *

IF YOU COULD SHARE A WARM BED WITH TWO OF SAMMY'S CAPTORS
(THREESOME-STYLE), WHO WOULD YOU CHOOSE TO SPEND THE NIGHT WITH?


CHAD? HUNTER? MATT? BRODY? ANDREW?

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Hunter and Chad, easy lol

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER FEB 05*

Posted: Thu Feb 06, 2025 5:43 am
by ShadowHusky
Okay, I've just caught up and WOW what a story so far. I'm really intrigued to learn more about Hunter, he seems so much more reserved than the rest of the group, so he intrigues me a lot. I hope they don't gag him with laundry, despite that being my favourite gag, I agree with Andrew about erring on the side of caution

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER FEB 05*

Posted: Thu Feb 06, 2025 4:12 pm
by blackbound
Not a moment of rest for Sammy despite him being in the most restful of positions! I can only imagine how his current gag must wear on him.

But knowing you, he's going to wish for that flavor-neutral stuffer back really soon.

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER FEB 05*

Posted: Fri Feb 07, 2025 12:02 am
by bondagefreak
Wow, someone's back in full force. Haha, welcome to the adventure @ShadowHusky!
I'm really glad to see you enjoying this. I somewhat thought you might ;)

Going over the comments you dropped as you were reading, it's quite thrilling to see that prior to his involvement in Chapter 15 your appreciation of Andrew was modest a best, and that he's grown a lot in your esteem as a result of his being featured in this narrative.

As for Hunter's relative reservedness, you're right! But my counter-argument may shed some additional light on the matter. Basically, I think it's important to consider who he's being compared to. Chad, Matt and Brody are, by any measurable standard, quite vocal and rambunctious. Even someone a little less loud & rowdy (more average guys like Corey, Chris, Shawn, etc) would appear markedly more reserved when compared to those three. Basically, what I'm saying is that Hunter gives the illusion of being reserved, simply due to his three colleagues being on the extreme end of the spectrum.

It's sort of like Nick with Brad vs Nick with Zack. Reader perceptions of Nick change a lot depending on who he's being contrasted to. With Brad, Nick comes off as the kinder & more playful one. With Zack, the same Nick can come off as being stern. You get what I mean. But yes, while I wouldn't qualify Hunter as being reserved, you're right to point out that he's quieter than his colleagues.



Bradstick wrote: 5 months ago Fantastic chapter! Unfortunately I could see myself doing the same thing in Matt’s position, though for entirely different reason.. Antagonize Chad by tickling his pit in hopes of him wrestling you to pin you into his pit.

Eeesh, I think you'd regret that pretty quickly. Antagonise Chad in that manner and he would make you eat his pit out.
Yes, I know. You're a piggy and that's precisely what you'd want. Cheeky guy 8-)

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER FEB 05*

Posted: Fri Feb 07, 2025 12:25 am
by Bradstick
bondagefreak wrote: 5 months ago Eeesh, I think you'd regret that pretty quickly. Antagonise Chad in that manner and he would make you eat his pit out.
Yes, I know. You're a piggy and that's precisely what you'd want. Cheeky guy 8-)
Your warnings only strength my resolve! I’d eat out his pit any day …and every other part of his body! Oink Oink ;)

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER FEB 05*

Posted: Fri Feb 07, 2025 10:15 am
by ShadowHusky
bondagefreak wrote: 5 months ago Wow, someone's back in full force. Haha, welcome to the adventure @ShadowHusky!
I'm really glad to see you enjoying this. I somewhat thought you might ;)

Going over the comments you dropped as you were reading, it's quite thrilling to see that prior to his involvement in Chapter 15 your appreciation of Andrew was modest a best, and that he's grown a lot in your esteem as a result of his being featured in this narrative.

As for Hunter's relative reservedness, you're right! But my counter-argument may shed some additional light on the matter. Basically, I think it's important to consider who he's being compared to. Chad, Matt and Brody are, by any measurable standard, quite vocal and rambunctious. Even someone a little less loud & rowdy (more average guys like Corey, Chris, Shawn, etc) would appear markedly more reserved when compared to those three. Basically, what I'm saying is that Hunter gives the illusion of being reserved, simply due to his three colleagues being on the extreme end of the spectrum.

It's sort of like Nick with Brad vs Nick with Zack. Reader perceptions of Nick change a lot depending on who he's being contrasted to. With Brad, Nick comes off as the kinder & more playful one. With Zack, the same Nick can come off as being stern. You get what I mean. But yes, while I wouldn't qualify Hunter as being reserved, you're right to point out that he's quieter than his colleagues.



Bradstick wrote: 5 months ago Fantastic chapter! Unfortunately I could see myself doing the same thing in Matt’s position, though for entirely different reason.. Antagonize Chad by tickling his pit in hopes of him wrestling you to pin you into his pit.

Eeesh, I think you'd regret that pretty quickly. Antagonise Chad in that manner and he would make you eat his pit out.
Yes, I know. You're a piggy and that's precisely what you'd want. Cheeky guy 8-)
You're right with that, in comparison is quieter, but I'm not unobservant to notice that is group rough housing, you have included him in laughing bouts; he has had no issue in kicking off his shoes with his mates; of course it is all by comparison. I may have made claims in earnest haha

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER FEB 05*

Posted: Fri Feb 07, 2025 8:51 pm
by bondagefreak
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Just wanted to tag those of you who've dropped recent comments to say thank you for the continued and much-appreciated support. This tale is taking longer to produce than I'd originally anticipated, but the extra minutes you guys take to voice your interest in the narrative motivates me greatly and fuels me to press on. Thank you. I really appreciate the support.

The next chapter is currently in production, so stay tuned. Thanks again, guys.

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER FEB 05*

Posted: Sat Feb 08, 2025 5:07 pm
by bondagefreak
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Hey guys. Just a quick post to let all 43 three of you know that I'll be cleaning up & shortening the tag list very shortly. All those of you being tagged right now have commented on Sammy's tale at least once since its beginnings six months ago. But many of you haven't given any recent signs of interest in the story. Seeing as how it can be annoying to be pinged with a notification each time a story you're no longer interested in receives a new chapter, I think a cleanup of the above list is now warranted.


Please be aware that I don't mean anything by it and that this is being done for your own sake and not mine. Those who haven't commented and/or given any sign of interest in this tale over the course of the last couple months will be removed from the tag list so as not to be bothered by regular and unwanted notification pings.

If, however, you are one of those concerned but are still following this and still want to be notified, I urge you to let me know either by dropping a comment here or by sending me a PM letting me know you're still following the story.

** Only those who've not commented in the last three months will be removed from the tag list. As such, regular/recent participants will remain on the tag list and continue to receive notifications.


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Also a quick shoutout to the 40+ registered readers who are following this (as made evident by the poll) but have yet to voice their interest: If you wish to be kept updated and notified of new chapters as soon as they're published, all you need to do is drop a quick comment to let me know you're a regular reader. I'll be sure to add you to the tag list if you do.

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *ANNOUNCEMENT FEB 08*

Posted: Sat Feb 08, 2025 8:06 pm
by Ossassin
Fair enough, always good to do a purge here and there, I tend to subscribe to the pieces I like anyway so the pinging is helpful for the ones I haven’t read yet.

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *ANNOUNCEMENT FEB 08*

Posted: Sat Feb 08, 2025 10:24 pm
by noarmgr
I don't remember the last time I commented but it seems like not so long ago 🤔. However I want to clarify that I personally have a great interest in this story!

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *ANNOUNCEMENT FEB 08*

Posted: Sat Feb 08, 2025 10:27 pm
by sock slave boy
Hi, I'm reporting my presence so as not to lose the signposting, I know that I'm not very present at the moment, whether it's consciously or not, know that I'm doing well and that I continue to follow this story with interest, even if it's currently difficult.

Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *ANNOUNCEMENT FEB 08*

Posted: Sat Feb 08, 2025 11:00 pm
by bondagefreak
HERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER, GUYS.
CONTINUE TO THE NEXT PAGE!


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