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Re: Small Town's Dark Secret (M+/M+) FINISHED

Posted: Thu Aug 01, 2024 6:23 am
by DeeperThanRed
What an amazing ending!

Almost everyone got more or less happy endings and Gimp's revenge was simply glorious :D Great job on this story - what initially appeared to be a simple anthology story ended up being so captivating and well-written! Thanks a lot for sharing this with us.

Re: Small Town's Dark Secret (M+/M+) FINISHED

Posted: Thu Aug 01, 2024 9:53 am
by blackbound
I have to agree with @DeeperThanRed on all counts.

Who knows, maybe the Punished and the Old Master will end up as tributes together next year?

Re: Small Town's Dark Secret (M+/M+) FINISHED

Posted: Thu Aug 01, 2024 1:09 pm
by Bootmark
Incredible from beginning to end!

Re: Small Town's Dark Secret (M+/M+) FINISHED

Posted: Fri Aug 02, 2024 3:12 am
by CaptiveDan
DeeperThanRed wrote: 10 months ago What an amazing ending!

Almost everyone got more or less happy endings and Gimp's revenge was simply glorious :D Great job on this story - what initially appeared to be a simple anthology story ended up being so captivating and well-written! Thanks a lot for sharing this with us.
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and I'm happy the ending came together and was satisfying! I had a lot of fun writing the gimp's revenge, I feel like he (and his victim) deserved it the most

Re: Small Town's Dark Secret (M+/M+) FINISHED

Posted: Fri Aug 02, 2024 3:17 am
by CaptiveDan
blackbound wrote: 10 months ago I have to agree with @DeeperThanRed on all counts.

Who knows, maybe the Punished and the Old Master will end up as tributes together next year?
Very very likely!

I have to say, your comments throughout the story have been both really supportive AND had a impact on the finale. I definitely thought a lot more about the Gimp because of your interest in his situation which ended up driving the "continued bondage" theme of a few of the epilogues.

I'm really enjoying reading your current story and seeing the long term bondage elements there. I'm always fascinated (as someone who irl wouldn't want to be restrained for more than maybe a weekend at a time) by the idea and mechanics of keeping a long term prisoner - as evidenced by the Gimp and Punished stories

Re: Small Town's Dark Secret (M+/M+) FINISHED

Posted: Fri Aug 02, 2024 3:17 am
by CaptiveDan
Bootmark wrote: 10 months ago Incredible from beginning to end!
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Re: Small Town's Dark Secret (M+/M+) FINISHED

Posted: Fri Aug 02, 2024 3:18 am
by CaptiveDan
Gonna make a few short stories next (need a break from long forms) but I do have an idea to one day return to the small Iowa town for town wide game of bondage and betrayal

Re: Small Town's Dark Secret (M+/M+) FINISHED

Posted: Mon Aug 12, 2024 3:40 pm
by Camguy2050
fantastic
bound gimp all the way for me
i would enjoy that so much

Re: Small Town's Dark Secret (M+/M+) FINISHED

Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2024 3:09 am
by ChairBoy
I've been horny af for some cop content so I went to search and found a chapter from your story! im starting the first one now and ill tell you what I think (:

Re: Small Town's Dark Secret (M+/M+) FINISHED

Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2024 3:11 am
by ChairBoy
oh fuck I just read the first opening epilogue and how interesting?!

Re: Small Town's Dark Secret (M+/M+) FINISHED

Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2024 10:48 am
by Straitjacketed
Belatedly enjoying this one: disparate bondage elements with a central vibe that reminds me, oddly, of Stephen King (maybe your profile name should be "Stephen Kink"? ;) ) with the cornfield motif, or maybe the classic 1948 short story 'The Lottery', by Shirley Jackson.

With me, it's the different captors who stand out, especially. Favourites were the cop and, most of all, the mechanic.

Re: Small Town's Dark Secret (M+/M+) FINISHED

Posted: Sun Sep 22, 2024 10:43 am
by CaptiveDan
Camguy2050 wrote: 9 months ago fantastic
bound gimp all the way for me
i would enjoy that so much
Thanks! Glad you like it. Gimp has been pretty popular, which I guess makes sense since he gets the most time in captivity.
ChairBoy wrote: 8 months ago I've been horny af for some cop content so I went to search and found a chapter from your story! im starting the first one now and ill tell you what I think (:
Yay! I hope you like it! Let me know how the cop chapters were once you get to them
Straitjacketed wrote: 8 months ago Belatedly enjoying this one: disparate bondage elements with a central vibe that reminds me, oddly, of Stephen King (maybe your profile name should be "Stephen Kink"? ;) ) with the cornfield motif, or maybe the classic 1948 short story 'The Lottery', by Shirley Jackson.

With me, it's the different captors who stand out, especially. Favourites were the cop and, most of all, the mechanic.
Glad you're enjoying it! Being compared to Stephen King is an honor. I feel like there's alot of similarities between horror, comedy, and erotic storytelling

Re: Small Town's Dark Secret (M+/M+) FINISHED

Posted: Sun Dec 01, 2024 8:48 pm
by ChairBoy
ChairBoy wrote: 8 months ago I've been horny af for some cop content so I went to search and found a chapter from your story! im starting the first one now and ill tell you what I think (:
Yay! I hope you like it! Let me know how the cop chapters were once you get to them

I LOVED THEM! I am super into struggle, domination, smother, and forcing so there was so many characters and situations I loved!
I love the man punished for the past, the flat tire, the pornstar?! All the surprise things I really fucked with (: the only criticism I have artistically would be in the last chapter when everyone is getting there last paragraph the officers part is first and recounts the two getting shocked, and tortured, I would’ve preferred the officers part last because I instantly skipped to the details of the guy getting tortured and spoiled it. But… I think I was just crazy horny over this story haha. I loved this story! Those parts truly made the story! I was in the search bar searching “cop” and this story popped up!

Re: Small Town's Dark Secret (M+/M+) FINISHED

Posted: Sun Dec 01, 2024 8:49 pm
by ChairBoy
I feel as if this story needs to by hyped up more lol

Re: Small Town's Dark Secret (M+/M+) FINISHED

Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2025 5:02 am
by ChairBoy
hope this thread gets fixed!