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Re: Safari Jo does it again. (F+/F+) [NEW 017 posted Dec 7th]
Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2020 3:03 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: Safari Jo does it again. (F+/F+) [NEW 018 posted Dec 13th]
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2020 11:50 am
by RopeBunny
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Re: Safari Jo does it again. (F+/F+) [NEW 019 posted Dec 17th]
Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2020 8:42 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: Safari Jo does it again. (F+/F+) [NEW 019 posted Dec 17th]
Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2020 8:48 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: Safari Jo does it again. (F+/F+) [FINISHED]
Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2020 8:33 am
by Nainur
'thumbs up' from me, certainly something different, which is quality in itself! Enjoyed it!
Re: Safari Jo does it again. (F+/F+) [FINISHED]
Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2020 6:38 pm
by Risperdaltied
Excellent story and I loved the subtly done ending!
Looking forward to reading more by you!
Re: Safari Jo does it again. (F+/F+) [NEW 019 posted Dec 17th]
Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2020 12:33 am
by slackywacky
RopeBunny wrote: 4 years ago
Please also forgive any mistakes made. In my defense, again, this is a TUGs board, and I am not a professional writer. Were this a proper book I'd of written the whole thing before uploading even chapter 001, and so any simple mistakes could've been spotted before they occurred. I hope any that do exist don't detract from the overall story. Which is one I'm proud of.
I would not worry about not being a professional writer, don't think many on this board are, me included. We all make mistakes, even after proofreading our stories again and again. You miss your own mistakes because you don't read the text, but you see what your brain tells you.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story and would not have mind a chapter on the fight, it would have added more to the story. Look at [mention]wolfman[/mention]'s stories. not every chapter is full of TUG. Yes, this is a TUG board, but that does not mean you can't add some character building or story development.
Please write more, I am looking forward to it.
Re: Safari Jo does it again. (F+/F+) [FINISHED]
Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2020 8:05 am
by RopeBunny
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