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Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Thu May 04, 2023 11:11 am
by Xtc
. . . and prolonged?
Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Thu May 04, 2023 12:31 pm
by Red86
I had a feeling him leaving the cuffs and keys handy was gonna come back to bite him
Me personally, even though I like tying and almost entirely hate being tied, I think I'd been more mad about my saved game data being erased. Them getting the upper hand, tying him up and putting him through basically the same things he put them through was par for the course. Even deleting the blackmail. But deleting save game data, that's grounds for a longer round next time. Perhaps when he gets his revenge, he'll make sure he doesn't leave an opening for the twins to turn the tables again. Maybe we'll even see some of those ideas from chapter 4 come into play
Excellent story, looking forward to his revenge!! Even if it becomes an endless battle between the siblings

Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Thu May 04, 2023 8:31 pm
by blackbound
Thanks, [mention]The slave[/mention].
[mention]Straitjacketed[/mention], [mention]Xtc[/mention] and [mention]Red86[/mention] - deleting another's save game is a declaration of war, as [mention]Red86[/mention] notes. The twins better be on their toes and remember that revenge is a dish best served cold, over the course of several days.
Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Fri May 05, 2023 4:44 pm
by cj2125
Well, you gave us a twist and then you undid it. Well played sir!
This was a great story! And I loved the ending. Now it's time to wait for his well deserved revenge!
Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Sat May 06, 2023 2:40 pm
by blackbound
cj2125 wrote: 2 years ago
Well, you gave us a twist and then you undid it. Well played sir!
This was a great story! And I loved the ending. Now it's time to wait for his well deserved revenge!
I will have such revenges on you both,
That all the world shall— I will do such things,—
What they are, yet I know not but they shall be
The terrors of the earth.
— Shakespeare,
King Lear
Coming soon!
Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Sun May 07, 2023 9:28 am
by Carnath
Very nice story, very well description of the strict bondage, and can't wait to read the sequel. Revenge is so sweet

Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Sun May 07, 2023 6:02 pm
by blackbound
Carnath wrote: 2 years ago
Very nice story, very well description of the strict bondage, and can't wait to read the sequel. Revenge is so sweet
Good news:
the wait is over!
Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Wed May 10, 2023 6:00 pm
by Pup Wingletang
With a story title like that it was impossible to resist - I've been playing Zelda for 25 years and am very much looking forward to Friday!
Glad to see the PG rating has done nothing to dampen down your strict and imaginative bondage scenarios. I can definitely relate to multiple hours passing by unnoticed when a new game takes over your attention. Too bad for the twins this resulted in them getting cold and wet in the garden although we know the worst thing by far is not getting to play Zelda.
Love the classic twist at the end, especially when we think the prisoner has been good. Blackmail only works if you can keep hold of the evidence! The perils of gaming for too long!
Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Thu May 11, 2023 4:25 pm
by blackbound
Pup Wingletang wrote: 2 years ago
With a story title like that it was impossible to resist - I've been playing Zelda for 25 years and am very much looking forward to Friday!
Glad to see the PG rating has done nothing to dampen down your strict and imaginative bondage scenarios. I can definitely relate to multiple hours passing by unnoticed when a new game takes over your attention. Too bad for the twins this resulted in them getting cold and wet in the garden although we know the worst thing by far is not getting to play Zelda.
Love the classic twist at the end, especially when we think the prisoner has been good. Blackmail only works if you can keep hold of the evidence! The perils of gaming for too long!
Thanks for your comment. I was thinking there'd be a couple of gamers here who knew exactly what I was talking about
Make sure to check out the sequel when you have time! Not a lot there yet.
Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Fri May 12, 2023 1:13 pm
by Stormee
I had to read this story before I can read the sequel. Quite a story of brothers playing games like these with a little blackmail, but I can't wait to see the revenge.

Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Tue Aug 06, 2024 3:25 am
by nchlsh
Great story! Definitely want to read more about these brothers.
Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Tue Aug 06, 2024 11:59 am
by blackbound
nchlsh wrote: 10 months ago
Great story! Definitely want to read more about these brothers.
Glad you liked it! The brothers are also in this story:
The Terrors of the Earth.
Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Tue Aug 13, 2024 7:26 am
by Killua
I'm late to the party, but it's a great story. I don't know how I missed it in the first place. I think it's great that those siblings have such a great relationship that they torture and blackmail each other but still don't tell their parents nor be angry at each other for too long. Even though the older one has a little mean attitude at time, he does care for his younger brothers a lot when he thought about all things he could do but decided against it because it would be too dangerous or they could get sick.
Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Tue Aug 13, 2024 3:43 pm
by blackbound
Killua wrote: 9 months ago
I'm late to the party, but it's a great story. I don't know how I missed it in the first place. I think it's great that those siblings have such a great relationship that they torture and blackmail each other but still don't tell their parents nor be angry at each other for too long. Even though the older one has a little mean attitude at time, he does care for his younger brothers a lot when he thought about all things he could do but decided against it because it would be too dangerous or they could get sick.
Much of it is, of course, for show, but as the older brother alone against twins, Ash feels like he has to show them their place so they don't gang up on him like they did here...
Thanks for leaving a comment!
Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Sat Sep 07, 2024 7:40 pm
by FelixSH
I didn't expect a story of this kind from you. Normally, your stuff is more hardcore, right? I don't have anything insightful to say, just that I enjoyed the story. Brothers torturing each other, while still caring, is always fun.
I'll read the sequel later. Feel free to mention me, in case you produce more stories like this .
Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Sat Sep 07, 2024 7:55 pm
by blackbound
FelixSH wrote: 9 months ago
I didn't expect a story of this kind from you. Normally, your stuff is more hardcore, right? I don't have anything insightful to say, just that I enjoyed the story. Brothers torturing each other, while still caring, is always fun.
I'll read the sequel later. Feel free to mention me, in case you produce more stories like this .
You're right, most of my stuff is over in Fictional Stories for Adults. This has not one but two sequels, the second of which,
Stars, Hide Your Fires will conclude tomorrow!
Cut is also For Everyone, but quite different.
Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Sat Sep 07, 2024 7:57 pm
by FelixSH
I'll let you know, when I've checked them out. Thanks for telling me.
Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Sat Sep 07, 2024 8:07 pm
by blackbound
FelixSH wrote: 9 months ago
I'll let you know, when I've checked them out. Thanks for telling me.
Thanks for checking them out. I totally forgot about
Benefits, which I took as an incentive to finally update the story list linked from my banner.
Re: Tears of the Kingdom (m/mm) - FINAL Part 5, 2023-05-04
Posted: Sat Feb 01, 2025 6:32 am
by Snozzberry
Revenge is sweet when dosed out in large amounts to little brothers.
