Stories of Tie Up Games

The Creature

“Now Princess! Submit to your fate!” Charity knelt before her Clinton in the remains of a chemise nightie, the glint of red from a ballgag lighting her eyes and accenting her fiery blush. She tried to twist her wrists, but the bonds imprisoning them were aided by tight ropes ...

New chapter. As if anyone cares. I think I'm just going to bag the whole thing.
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Jillian

Dillan sighs as he leaves me, His chest still heaves as he raises himself on his knees and looks down on me, his face vacant from his climax as I lay before him with ...

You have to just love your characterizations and the details of your settings. Almost makes me want to do a Camp Evergreen capture-the-flag story (at least if anyone would respond to it).

And speaking of, it's a little dismaying to see that you too have had comments slacking off a bit. You deserve ...

Thanks, but as I see you've discovered, it only works in journals and profile widgets, not in standard Sta.sh Writer. It would be nice if the dA powers-that-be would actually give a damn about its writers.

Xtc wrote: 6 years ago Yes, there are various reasons for posting pdf files on DA but I keep getting complaint that they can't be read.
Oh well, win some - lose some.

I=t would be nice if dA had a real variety of fonts with their word processor, too. Oh well. That's how it goes.

Xtc wrote: 6 years ago That might be a good idea.
We're considering a story contest at the minute.

Funny, but over at my dA place, I already have a little something that might work for this. Just imagine me having something that could actually fit in the "For Everyone" section!

Maybe we should have a Pirate TUG contest of some kind.

Isn't formatting really a bitch on this site?
Hang on in there, brother, we need the literate writing!


I do my best, old bean, but it gets difficult when there is so little response. As to the formatting, the color switching is actually pretty easy. If there was a choice of fonts, though, that ...

Well, there is that.

Nice understated start

And Wal-Mart's okay, but if you want a true TUGs nirvana, it really has to be Lowe's or Home Depot.

With Sam as Jane, amirite? I'd watch it!

Really, any comments at all. Even if it's to tell me how much my story sucks.

Meanwhile, Charity and Alyssa are getting the ball rolling for the next part of the evening's festivities.
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Charity

Okay, first of all, ballgags are weird. I didn’t particularly ...

I'm not sure what you think is so wrong with it. Just the right amount of detail, some good hints of internal dialogue, and of course a well-described cuffing scene. You might have done a few more dialogue bits between you and your boyfriend, but that's the only picky point I could see. Keep up the ...

Well done, old sport! Now, if only the Shrimp can cathch Smeggy Eddie unawares and dispense a little justice--oh, who am I kidding? THere's probbaly more torment waiting at home! So yes, let's see it!

I always say, "never trust the private-school girls." Now you know why.

Nicely crafted chapter; you're good with dialogue and scene-setting.

Umm...yah. That's why you don't use real names during a kidnapping.

Unless she's planning to keep Tori permanently silent (or there a few extra twists ), Alexa and Heather will probably be on the cheerleading squad of OITNB High...

So bring on the twists!

Perhaps listing my story here will draw some eyeballs, and maybe even comments. Hence...

Title: A Bind of my Own Making: The Next Generation!

Author: Mister Mistoffelees

Gender Roles: M/F (for the moment, at least)

Content Rating: MA (hence its place in Fictional Adult Stories)

Status: Ongoing ...

Some of the best repartee ever posted here. "Reminds me of a former boyfriend" was precious.

I haven't seen the prequel stories to this, but even as a stand-alone, it's plenty amusing! Mixing TUGs with other games is an interesting variation!

Rule Number One: never betray someone who can get back at you.

Well done!

xtc, it's just been a busy time, and yes, the lack of comments was getting me down, both here and at dA. Took a while to work up the nerve to come back.

I'm experimenting with the formatting a little in this chapter as I'll need a way to diferentiate text from spoken words. As always, any comments ...

So she will go out with him, even after he farms out her kidnapping. Mike must really do something for her!
(Mistoffelees says as he feverishly copies down ideas to steal for his own stories)...

It may be just me, but as someone who's written a few girl-detective stories in a similar vein, I don't see any problems with this style. Jason carries the point; if these situations can be shown on over-the-air TV, it surely wouldn't be offensive here. Of course, you never know where the bluenoses ...

I had a French teacher I would have liked to do this to. And a few classmates to take Alison's place.

I can only wish I had a power like that.

Oh wait. I didn't say it right, did I?

Very interesting concept!