Stories of Tie Up Games

Gender: male

Age: 20

Seeking: Female (any role) or Male (any only)

Must Haves: being put in burlap bags or sleeping bags

Good to have: light bdsm but not to much

MUST NOT HAVE: nudity of any kind one word answers

PM me if you are interested

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saw this thread wanted to contribute

this is from avengers academy giant size number 1

such a great begging can't wait for what ever comes next

this is such a great story really love the medical bondage can't wait till the next story

Just to show you how punctuation can improve your story, take this edit of your first paragraph:



I didn't correct spelling and word choice issues, but this makes the story MUCH more readable and easier to follow. Just put more effort into your writing and readers will follow you more.

If ...

Just to show you how punctuation can improve your story, take this edit of your first paragraph:

When Tomas got home, he did the same routine: put his stuff on the ground, grab a snack, and then go into his room until supper. He had planned on that, but right before tomas got inside, his mom ...

The idea is not bad, I like it. But you should really really consider using some punctuation marks. It's really hard to read without them, especially when it come to your characters speaking to each other. It's hard to tell where a speech starts and where it ends. And if you want to write another ...

this is a revised version of the original story i tried to cut out certain things and re read it several times pleas feel free to still criticize but i won't revise this one again ill start typing something new and hope you like that better.

When Tomas got home he did the same routine: put his ...

love the story very much